Hey, AH I LOVE THIS! Please continue! Report Review
I really like this-original idea. Keep it up! :)Author's Response: Why thank you ^_^ New chapter will be up as soon as I can find the right document. :P Report Review
Really like it! Can't wait for more!Author's Response: More is on the way! Don't worry ^_^ Report Review
I'm really loving your story so far! I can't believe this story isn't SUPER popular! Even though you don't have that many reviews yet, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't give up on it. As a matter of fact, please update as soon as possible! I really enjoy reading this! It's very well written and interesting. I definately can't wait to read the next chapter!Author's Response: Ha ha! I'm happy you like it. I've actually written it all. I'm just toddling along waiting for validation and having to change minor things in order to get them validated. There are several chapters in all. I'm already working on the sequel. I'm also working on another story too. Well, three others, actually. But thank you for the review. It means a lot to me. Report Review
I liked the way you portrayed your characters... I like Ash the best :) Small tip though: you MIGHT want to sign out before you review YOURSELF... (that's what I do...xD) because there are two reviews by ShanTheCookieDrugger, this story's author ;DAuthor's Response: Really? I see these: Review #2, by dobby88 and Review #3, by Ravenclaws Princess. Probably a glitch or something. But thank you for reviewing :3 It means a heck of a lot Report Review
I thought this story sounded interesting and it is!!! It's quite an unusual way to bring a muggle into hogwarts and I've never read a marauders story that does it :) (which is good because that means it's unique ;) ) Looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens between Sirius and Ash! :)Author's Response: Aw! Thanks. I'm not sure how I came up with the idea but it popped up. I had to edit some of the ratings for the second chapter but it should be validated soon. Here's hoping anyway ^_^ Thank you for the review! It's appreciated. Report Review
this is so good!! hilarious!! Will Ash kiss Sirius? Will Sirius kiss Ash? Will something happen?? (of course it will, but whatever) anyway keep writing. i love how you're so descriptive about everything. am awaiting next chapter great writing: 10/10!!!Author's Response: Aw! Thanks! I have the rest of it typed up but I need to wait for validation, don't I? :) Thanks so much for commenting. I'm so glad someone's read it. Report Review
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