Okay, I love this story. I love loony Fay ( even though she's not that loony), I love the potter boys especially James ( I'm sensing jealousy and maybe a bit of lurve?) and I love Rose, Scorpius, Fred, Luke and practically everyone else. Though I'm not sure what I think about Kyle yet. I'm super exited to see what you do with the plot line where it goes and everything. Also your writing style is lovely and very easy to read it also has great flow. AhhAuthor's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I am thrilled to hear that you like it so much. Trust me, Fay is a bit loony, but maybe not so much right now. She's a bit ... over protective of her identity and her reputation. I promise to update soon. I have quite a bit of the next chapter written, but I need to fix a couple things with it first. Thank you for the lovely review and have a wonderful day! Report Review
No Fay, you silly girl. James LIKES you! honestly...woopsies, sorry! I tend to talk to characters sometimes :D hehe This story is really really funny, I ADORE it! hehe please update soon, even though, I know that it's hard! xxAuthor's Response: Aw! Thanks so much! I've been having trouble starting the next chapter, but I'm getting thought it. I have some ideas and I'm going to try and get most of the chapter written tonight. Thank you so much for your kind review! It really means a lot to me. I promise to update soon! Have a great week! Report Review
Again, very good! I LOVED the Fay/James (Fames? Jay?) Scene. They're adorable! Not too sure how I feel about Kyle though...he seems a little sketch. So as of now, I'm pretty much a Fames shipper and not a Fyle/Kay one. That could change but probably not. James was really adorable when he was jealous!
I really wanna know how the dating thing goes. Please update quickly!Author's Response: Aw! Thanks so much! I really do love James/Fay together and the scene in this chapter is probably one of my favorites between them. There will be more of that in the next chapter hopefully. :)
And, I know. Kyle can seem a little sketchy right now, but I know that he doesn't mean to be. Right now, he is truly interested in Fay. But, who knows what will happen on this date right?
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It means so much to me and I'm glad I got some input. Thank you!!! Report Review
Hello love! I must say that I greatly enjoyed this. It was funny and corky, which are two things that I really love.
I loved the whole Fred only eating orange vegetables. It was strange but really funny. Same with the gravy.
I really love the Scorose. They're so cute!
Also Lynnie is very funny and sarcastic, which makes for great narratives
Overall, very fabulous! Excited to see where you go with this story! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you like this story and I'm glad to get your input on this. It really means a lot to me that you've read my story. :)
I love Fred. He's probably my favorite character coming into this story. And, Scorose are probably going to have more moments later in the story.
Thank you again for your lovely review! Report Review
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