Update soon? I need to knw more !Author's Response: Next chapter will be up really soon! Don't worry!
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Hey so i was just wondering if Harry is still going to give Mia the hogwarts a history book necklace from ron still? Also could u make Mia super super super super pretty for the Christmas ball so that Malfoy gets super jealous? i think that would be funny.Author's Response: Between Draco getting jealous, Hermione getting jealous, the ball chapter (the chapter after the next one) is going to be pretty epic. And yes, I am still having Harry give her Ron's necklace for Christmas. And Hermione's dress will be literally perfect, so of COURSE she is going to be really really pretty. :) (but it's Hermione, after all. When is she not pretty? Lol) i am so excited to write the ball chapter, because I've already got everything planned, so I know exactly how it's going to "go down". I can't wait for you guys to read it. Thanks for the lovely review, and the next chapter(s) will be up soon! Report Review
HOW could you leave us hanging here? PLEASE tell me you mean to continue. I'm almost in tears.Author's Response: Aw! Dont worry, there will be at LEAST 37 chapters, and I'm almost done the next one, so it should be up soon! Report Review
It is one of my favorites too! :D This chapter contained so much just STUFF that I read it twice for full comprehension! I'm curious to read whether Blaise and Hermione will get together or what will happen after break! So many exciting things occurred in this chapter to set up future problems and good events so I'm anxiously anticipating what's really going on! dfdkfhdjkfhafdaskfd I can't even explain my want to know what Nott & Daphne's plan is to hurt Hermione!!! Update REALLY soon, I beg of you! :) xxAuthor's Response: I will, don't worry! Thanks for the lovely review! :) Report Review
I love Blaise, Draco's being a douche. Astoria is in the way which makes this story more suspenseful. Eager for some Dramione but absolutely great chapter! xxAuthor's Response: Ah you'll have to wait for some Dramione action, but I'll update really soon! Thanks for the lovely review! :) Report Review
K this is pretty much wht the others said but i LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS CHAPTER:) it was sooo good! And long too! I cant wait for the next one to be up!Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is being written, and it should be up soon, I hope! Thanks again for the lovely review! :) Report Review
Love love LOVED this chapter :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! Next chapter will be up soon, I hope!! :) Report Review
Write more ! can't wait to read more. Can you maybe add a scene where Draco is trying to make Hermione jealous somewhere in the future chapter ? I think it would be fun to readAuthor's Response: That's a really good idea, actually. Maybe I'll add it in the chapter after the next one. :) thanks for the lovely review! Report Review
Oh man. This is getting intense D:
10/10 madam (or sir.)Author's Response: Madam. And thanks! Next chapter should be up soon, so keep an eye out for it! :) Report Review
I love this :)
10/10 :)Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
Beautiful job once again!! This one was really nice because now all the pieces are finally coming together. Im surprised Hermione excepted blaise's offer but at least she wont be alone during the holidays! I cant wait for the next chapter to come out! Also if its possible could u put some more scenes with Harry and Hermione? i mean they are best friends plus harry really doesnt have anyone right now due to Ginny being somewhere in the unknown and ron still under the imperious curse.Author's Response: There will be a few scenes with Harry and Hermione in the upcoming chapters, mostly during the Christmas holidays. I haven't forgotten about Harry, so don't worry! But since the next couple of chapters will be crucial to the rest of the story, I expect them to be quite suspenseful. :) I hope you enjoy them, and thank you for the lovely review. Report Review
Gee, thanks for the cliffhanger! Gosh, now I have to wait and wait and wait for the next chapter. *sigh* Just kidding, that was AWESOME!! :D It's all beginning to come together and pieces of the puzzle are being fitted into place. Why must you write so well but also with such secrecy!? But seriously, that was by far your best chapter so far in this story! I'm super duper excited and anxiously awaiting the next installment! :) xxAuthor's Response: Ah thank you! I'm sorry about the cliffhanger but it was necessary. The next chapters will be more filled with surprises, and I am currently just about to finish the next chapter, which means it should be up soon, I hope. As for the secrecy, well... I can't give everything away, now can I? :p
Anyway, the next chapter will hopefully be up soon, so I hope you enjoy it! Thanks again for the amazingly wonderful review. :) Report Review
Grr Astoria is in the way of Dramione magic haha. Anyway great chapter, looking forward to the next one.Author's Response: Ah thanks! :) next chapter will be up as soon as I finish it (which should be soon, I hope). Thanks again for the lovely review! Report Review
This is a really good chapter! I'm finally glad she is being woken up and that the potion was ready!
I really want Draco and Hermione to get together! TeamDramione! Anyways,no faults on this chapter, can't wait for the next one! XAuthor's Response: Thanks! I worked really hard on this Chapter, so I'm glad you liked it. Next chapter will be up soon I hope!! :) thanks again! Report Review
I already told you in your one shot that I like this story but thought I'd leave you a proper review.
I read this whole story yesterday, once I'd started I couldn't stop! You put the right amount of mystery in each chapter to keep the readers interested. I love that this is a Dracp/Hermione story that doesn't just revolve around their relationship but has a real plot and twists and intrigue. I like that they obviously care for each other but you haven't immediately put them in a relationship and you also write about other relationships in the story like Harry and Ginny's. You also convey how affected they have all been by the war, and how there is still evil in the Wizarding world beyond Voldemort.
I picked up on a couple mistakes but nothing major, for example it's room of requirement, no s on the end. And I'm guessing you're an American author, I noticed a couple of 'Americanisms' such as 'mail' instead of post.
Overall I'm really enjoying this story and am really looming forward to the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I actually did notice that I messed up the "Room of Requirement", and I'm Canadian, actually, but I try my best to sound British when I write. Also I try to make the story more interesting each chapter, so that it's not predictable like some Dramiones are. I hate when stories of any kind are predictable. I must say that I am looking forward just as much as you are to the coming chapters, as the plot is starting to really come into play after Chapter 19, which is already in for validation. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter when it comes. Thank you again for your wonderful review. :)
I really enjoyed this chapter! Iv enjoed every chapter but this one i especially found it very cute! Dracos mum is such a sweetie in this story! I was up sooo late reading it! I couldnt put it donw! Keep up the amazin work and update soon! Cant wait for the chirstmas holidays to come! :)Author's Response: Thank you SOO MUCH! Chapter 18 is already in for validation, and I'm currently working on Chapter 19. I am so glad you like my story! And I stay up late working on it, so you probably stayed up just as much as I did. But you should get some sleep! ;) thanks again for the review! Report Review
This is a really good chapter, and i think i know what is up with Hermione, is it that she wanted to spend christmas with Draco?
I was hoping there would be more of the 'Here there be dragons' part in this from the necklace, but this is a really good chapter, cant wait for the next one!
SlightObessionAuthor's Response: Thanks! And as for what's up with Hermione, you'll find out in the next chapter! :) Report Review
I love this story can't wait to read the rest of it.
your story should be made into a movieAuthor's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is up, and the chapter after that should be up soon!! Thank you again! Report Review
I WILL GO READ IT RIGHT NOW!!! :D Well that was rather exciting, wasn't it? I like the interaction Hermione has with Narcissa Malfoy--it shows both of their true compassion and nonjudgmental feelings towards each other. DUN DUN DUN WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT? I WANT TO KNOW! :D Okay, rant over, but seriously, great job with this chapter, you set it up extremely well! :) xxAuthor's Response: Thank you! I was worried about writing a Quidditch scene, because I didn't want to mess it up, but I think it turned out okay! And I'm REALLY, REALLY excited for you all to read the next two chapters, becuse they are probably the most crucial to the story. Anyway, thanks again for the amazing review! :) Report Review
I think you're a really great writer! Sometimes there are character choices that I don't think are consistent with the books but, of course, this is your story and I think it's wonderful. Keep the chapters coming, I can't get enough.Author's Response: Thanks! :) that makes me really happy! The next chapter will be up soon, and after that the plot starts getting much better. :) I hope you'll enjoy it! Also, you might want to check out my OneShot "Yule Tide Kisses". It's an outtake from this story, kinda. :) thanks again for the lovely review. Report Review
Ah that was phenomenal! :) So many things happened and I'm glad it was a longer chapter! I can tell things are starting to come together and it's getting trickier and trickier to figure out what's happening. So good! :) xxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapters will be longer, and the plot just gets better from here, so I hope you enjoy the next chapters, too! :) thanks again for the lovely review! Report Review
Write more ! I always love reading your storyAuthor's Response: Next chapter will be up soon, I hope! Report Review
I feel like the way you are potraying snape isnt how snape actully is, your making him to friendly and nice- but other then that great writing!Author's Response: Ah yes don't worry, I won't be doing that anymore! I realized how OOC he sounded lol. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Awww i feel so bad for Ron! how adorable is it that he took the time to make her that beautiful necklace that incorporated her love to read with her favorite book!Author's Response: I know! I loved writing that part. You'll have to wait and see what happens! Next chapter is already in for validation! :) Report Review
This is a really good story. Draco is my favourite Harry Potter character as you can probably tell by my name. But I really enjoy reading this. Keep up the good work. :)Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Report Review
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