HermioneGranger,
What must Kreacher think of these crazy teenagers? I'm sure he's never seen anything like it. I would have loved to see his reaction. Now I wonder what you have instore for the rest. Please update soon.
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HermioneGranger,
Now this is more like the Four that I remember. Now why wouldn't Harry think that it was Kreacher making the noise? But I wil admit it was a funny scene. Where did Ron's courage go? I think it's time that Grimmauld gets a makeover. Kreacher would do anything for Harry. To the next!
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HermioneGranger,
Now that was interesting. Malfoy being nice? Has he been obliviated? I can see in the future he and Harry being cooly polite to ech other, but this? Interesting! Something tells me the little boy Fred will be in the later part of this story. On to Grimmauld Place.
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HermioneGranger,
I was enjoying this story, with an eye to canon, then you had to put a telephone in the Burrow. I would imagine that after defeating Riddle the least the Ministry would do for Hermione, would be to hook her fireplace to the Floo network. I can understand why authors would want to add muggle technology to the story, but it doesn't work too well. I will though agree with the rest of your story. But I'm addicted to AtB's so your summary lured me in. So I'll continue.
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please keep going!! please write more. even though nothing much has happened, i want to keep reading!! your writing is so good!! 10/10

p.s. when will the next chapter be validated??

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter three is in the making!

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me like!! i really do like this story, im wondering what will come next!! sounds good, keep writing!! 10/10!

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Good Start, but a formatting note. When writing dialogue, each person's dialogue should be a seperate paragraph. You shouldn't mix people's dialogue in the same paragraph.

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip. In the second chapter, I have put the dialogue's in different paragraphs.

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i really like it especially the part at 2am, are you going to make anymore chapters? if you are can you please tell me! i think this is a great start but it might be a bit short.

Author's Response: Yeah, I have another chapter being validated at the moment.

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