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Review #1, by Emmy When All Else Fails

24th July 2014:
Cool story! It is very interesting how Harry and Hermione talk about love

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Review #2, by rayrayravenclaw When All Else Fails

1st August 2013:
I thought this was really good! I love Harry and Hermione's friendship and i also found my self laughing a lot during this especially at the end! you did a good job making it serious as well as funny and I was really afraid that this would become a harry/hermione but it didn't and I think you did you really good job capturing their friendship! Good job over all!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot :) I never saw those two that way. Harry/Hermione is the best girl/boy friendship I've ever known and I adore them for that :D Thank you so much for reading and moreover, for reviewing :)


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Review #3, by LoveToRead When All Else Fails

23rd November 2012:
I love this little One Shot! It shows Harry and Hermoine's friendship as clear as day. It's got enough humor in it, enough kindness in it and just enough sadness in it. One of my favourite One Shot on here.

Author's Response: Whoa thanks :O I didn't get much reviews at first so I thought maybe I've gone a bit overboard :) It turned out that way because theirs is the purest friendship I've ever known in the fictional AND real world :) Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing :)


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Review #4, by FELTSON When All Else Fails

10th September 2012:

Author's Response: :P Thank you :)

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Review #5, by Cassie Whitmann When All Else Fails

22nd August 2012:
Love seeing a piece on the relationship between Harry and Hermione! This is really well done and I quite enjoyed it. You've grabbed a very memorable scene here and I love what you've done to it.

So, I'll start with your characters here:

Your characters are quite believable and stay pretty true to canon, however, I don't know how caught up in gossip Hermione would be, but we do see bits and pieces of this throughout the books, specifically the one this scene came from, so it's still passable I think. ;) (and if not quite cannon, still good anyways!)

Other than that I don't really have much to say, other than job well done! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :D this was actually a chapter of another story. I'm revamping it and now this doesn't fir anywhere. But I love Harry and Hermione's friendship so I really didn't want to completely delete this chapter. Hehe sorry for rambling...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! Ohh yeah the gossip part. Hermione did tell Ginny to date other guys. That's why I picked on that. Hope I didn't overdo it :(

Thanks again for the review :D


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Review #6, by StormThief17 When All Else Fails

21st August 2012:
What a sweet story about Harry and Hermione's friendship. You really highlighted their brother/sister relationship here I think. Especially in showing them comforting each other, not just one or the other. You also did a great job of mixing some humor in there with talking about Cormac McLaggen and Draco (Drakie-Pooh.hahahha!). The only thing I would say is that it is a little jumpy at parts. Like you switch from one thing to another and I get lost for a second. If you maybe added some more transition paragraphs in it would be great! Like when Hermione all of a sudden starts talking about Ginny--I was confused how she got there. Maybe just following her thought process more on that. :) Great job!

Author's Response: Ohhh yeah :( Sorry about that. I'm working on the confusing parts. That's really my weak point. But hey, I'm learning :D Thank you for pointing out that love, it really helps when you guys do that.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)


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Review #7, by TyrannicFeenix When All Else Fails

13th August 2012:
An interesting moment to explore, and an insightful look into the minds of the two characters. I have always deeply loved these sorts of Harry Hermione moments. Even in stories where they are not together they still feel right, because tha's just how they are with one another. No matter who they are with they can always turn to one another for comfort.

I love the way you portrayed, how deeply they understand one another, most of it been learned through mere observation over the years. They share everything, but almost always without even a whisper between them. Which I am certain infuriates others to a point but it's their thing.

There were a few points throughout where something throws off the flow of the story, nothing too bad, but with some quick revision you can likely clear them up and get it flowing beautifully start to end. I don't think there were any spelling errors though so props on that.

A very good solid entry, and like i said a great moment to explore. Though on that last little interchange between them, I think Draco would prefer Harry to learn how to create little apples, just my observation but great stuff nonetheless.


Author's Response: Ahhh this is embarrassing! This is actually a chapter of this story. I'm revamping it and this doesn't fit in anywhere. So thought of turning it to a one-shot without throwing it away. But erm... not my best *blush*

I know!! Hehe I know you're a Harmony shipper but I LOVE their friendship. I love the way they are around each other, the way they feel and all that.

Awww thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Hehe yeah this is what kept Ron on a edge all the time. he thought something secret was going on. Hehe

HAAHAHA APPLES! I'll see to it ;)

Thank you so much for the review Chris.


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