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Review #1, by krazyboutharryginny Perfect Night

18th March 2015:
Hello! I'm reviewing for the HPFF review challenge and decided that this fic looked brilliant, so I read it... and I was right! This is honestly so good. It's very atmospheric- you've really done an excellent job of describing their surroundings and the beauty of them. I also love how loving and trusting they are, and your description of how they balance each other out. That's why I think they'd be such a good couple! He could loosen her up and she could keep him from going to far.
The worry that Lily has that James might get hurt because of her is one I'd never even considered her having, but it makes so much sense. It's interesting how that echoes the way Harry feels in the second wizarding war, and how he breaks up with Ginny so she won't get hurt for being with him.
Anyways, I really do love this fic. Amazing job.

-Kayla

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Review #2, by SunshineDaisies Perfect Night

21st February 2015:
Aw, that was adorable! It was sweet and honest, and a perfect snapshot of a very intimate moment. Perfect for a wedding night, of course! I love how James knows exactly what she's thinking, and Lily's fears are totally realistic. I love when authors incorporate that into fics, because I can't envision Lily NOT worrying about her relationship with James in that sense.

It was a really lovely read, good work!

Author's Response: Hiya!

I'm really glad that you liked the story! I had a moment of "I think I need to write a cute story" and Lily and James were just staring me in the face haha.

I thought that the reason James and Lily were so perfect for one another was because they fit each other and I tried to portray that here. I'm glad that Lily's fears were realistic!

Your review definitely made me smile so thanks for stopping by! :)


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Review #3, by Luna Dominique Potter Perfect Night

15th August 2012:
Oh my goodness, that was so sweet and adorable and amazing! Absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm really glad that the emotions were well captured :)

-Marissa


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Review #4, by Opalpixiechick Perfect Night

6th August 2012:
Awww. I love this. Great job. :)

Author's Response: Why thank you! :)

-Marissa


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