I think your book sucks like a vampire because vampires are beautiful and so is your beautiful book
i know you think it sucks which it does in my opion but it sucks like vampires and ive already explained this to you well you think its horrible but i think it sucks in the good way i explained to you
look i got to go now but i might comment more later.

Author's Response: lol thanks evi

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Author's Response: what is that? ^^^

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i love this story! put more on!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing Spring123, but I'm still writing chapter six

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AWESOME!!! ps love the name of the cafe!!! lolololololololololololololol

Author's Response: yeah, lol! thanks for reading and reviewing Spring123

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That was really really good!! :)

Author's Response: thanksss

xoxo

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Woah this was (even though it was short) an interesting chapter. What happened to Lucy? Is she okay? Will she be?

10/10

-jess

Author's Response: read on to find out.yes Lucy is fine...she's just got a bit of a headache...thanks!!

-RP

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That is awesome!!! Love the part at the end

Author's Response: thanks ames

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Kinda confusing but a really great start :)

Author's Response: yeah its a bit confusing, i was going to do a preface but then i didnt so yeah...thanks for reviewing anyway

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That was so good! I wish i could write like that :)

Author's Response: you can, your writing's really good!! thanks for reviewing!

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i think its very good, you have to email me a sneak peak of the next chapter!

Author's Response: thank you spring, ill see you tomorrow too ok?

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I thought this was a very cool idea for a story. It sounds really interesting and i can't wait for chapter 2. 10/10

Author's Response: thanks so much!!!

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