Hey, im really liking your book at the moment and not only because i love it when hermione becomes a zambini but your a good writer aswell. All i have to say is that your chapters a quite short and maybe its moving alittle too fast but maybe thats just me, also detail there can never be too much detail but dont over do it, just maybe describe one or two things abit more and definatly when draco comes into the book. Anyway please update soon cant wait to find out what happens next:)Author's Response: Thank you so much :-) detail has never been my strong point but i will try and get more. i will also try and slow it down because it annoys me when stories go to fast but alot of the slowing down comes with her feeling change to Draco :-) and will try and update sooner, Just need some inspiration :-) Thank you again :-) Secret Marauder X Report Review
You did a nice job setting the tone hope to see a chapter two soonAuthor's Response: thank you so much, i think this one may work...:)..X Report Review
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