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Review #1, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Chapter 4: Mongolian Shaman-Pirates and a Capybara

27th June 2013:
Woah. And the plot thickens. I can't think that anyone could be evil enough to kill a puppy. I'm pretty sure even Voldemort himself had a soft spot for puppies.
Ugh. Terrifying.

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Review #2, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Chapter 2: Badges and Molly Ringwald

27th June 2013:
I love the writing so much! I just wish these chapters were longer. Sigh.
Mulciber seems suitably evil and cockroach-like, and Stella and Lorcan seem awesome so far.
Annnd, enter Scorpius Malfoy. Interesting.
I'm excited :D
~Gilly

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Review #3, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne The red-tailed hawk and the frying pan.

27th June 2013:
I'm intrigued! I'm surprised this story isn't getting more attention! The writing is brilliant, the characters seem pretty vibrant and so far it has a lovely natural flow.

I really like Lucy so far, and you've made Percy seem as much a doofus as he did in the books so well done there!

I'm really excited to read more!
~Gilly

Author's Response: Thank-you so much for the kind review! As you can probably tell I had to abandon the story for quite a while (senior year of college, oh the woes of real life) but now I have more time I am definitely working on it, with plans for the rest of this one and a sequel. Glad you're enjoying it!

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Review #4, by Ro Chapter 2: Badges and Molly Ringwald

9th August 2012:
Is this story going to switch views between the Weasley clan or just Roxy and Lucy? I liked this chapter as it was from someone else's Roxy's POV and it's nice to see a friendship group of some of the other Weasley grandchildren other than the usual Rose/Albus/Scorpius :) Great story so far :))

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for the reviews, I'm sorry I only just realized they were there! As far as I've decided it's just going to switch between Lucy and Roxy, though I may have a bit of James later too, we'll have to see :) Thanks for reading!

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Review #5, by Ro The red-tailed hawk and the frying pan.

9th August 2012:
I like this story :) I understand where Lucy is coming from with the pressure from parents - it can be a nightmare sometimes. I'm intrigued to see where this story is going and I like the fact that some of the Weasley's are in school abroad!

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