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Review #1, by Mauge Chapter 3

23rd December 2012:
Be careul with some errors such as your instead of you're and please make sure it is understandable for the reader who is speaking in each quotation (you know the story and know who is speaking, we don't). Again, the story is quite good. I like it :D

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Review #2, by Mauge Chapter 1

23rd December 2012:
It has a few grammatical errors but it is a very good start. It is catching and that's really imprtant in a story :D I'will definitely keep on reading

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