I love this story! I cant wait for the update! I am definitely adding this to my favorites!

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it's interesting to see Jamie struggling as everyone is nice and showing her affection! I hope that she'll realise that everyone only want her to enjoy being there at the Burrow and I wonder if something will happen between her and Albus while they're there... can't wait to read more!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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One step at a time. It's hard enough to trust one person after everything. Having the entire clan in your back isn't exactly the next step on the ladder - more likely the tenth :p.

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why do you write gleyebrows and peyebrowword, its so confusing :(

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure it's an April fool's joke that they are playing on us. All the stories are like that right now. You just have to figure out what the words stand in for. "eyebrow" is standing in for "ass" so it would be glass and password. there are other ones too. "bunny rabbit" is girl and "frog" is guy. It's not me! haha

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I think my favorite part about this chapter (it'll seem lame) is about Albus being a very heavy sleeper.

I am a very, very heavy sleeper, so I could definitely relate to the bloke. Getting kissed awake is my ideal alarm clock too, but idk...I just really like his personality! Wonderful character development.

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I see that you've tried the multiple point of view approach. I find that it's easier for my readers to read when I label which POVs are which characters. I.E. POV-Albus: ...
POV-Jamie:...

Anyways, I feel bad for Jamie. I guess I must have misread that first chapter about the attempted rape. Geez, how awful! How did I misread it? Well, I'm a complete imbecile :P

All that being said, I'll probably come back and read this another time. I must eat lunch now :D

Author's Response: Haha no you're not. I try not to be too graphic so it ends up being kind of vague and I'll definitely label the POVs if I switch them again! Thanks for the tip!

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I'm surprised this story doesn't have more reviews/favorites! I think what I've read so far is absolutely brilliant! I'm going to read the next chapter, and I'll probably favorite it :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you like it!

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I LOVE IT ... LIKE SERIOUSLY I THINK IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY ... PLZ UPDATE SOON! 100/100

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading!

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great chapter this one! I liked how Jamie panicked, because she was afraid that Al's family wouldn't like her, but Al reassured her that they would love her! can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. I like the different pov shifts. :)

I would suggest putting a warning on at least the first chapter, though, as I found it really triggering when I read it..

I hope you update again soon :).

Author's Response: I will definitely do that! Thanks for reading!

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I can honestly say that's adorable. I love how you make Albus care so much about her. It's sweet. And something tells me Daniel knew she was going to kiss him because of how he knew basically everything else was going to happen. ~ Lily Lou

Author's Response: Isn't it?! I couldn't stop smiling when I was writing it. It was one of the main scenes I had planned out from the very beginning and I was so excited when I finally got to that part. It's really a turning point in their relationship.
Thanks for reading!

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wow! interesting development at the end! loved to read the part where they kiss! update soon please!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks! I love that part too! Thanks for reading!

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wow! this chapter was just... wow! in a good way of course! Jamie and Al's relationship is developping and now we can see why she is like this.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks! I was pretty nervous about writing that part. I'm glad it turned out well!

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it's great to see everyone's POV on Al and Jamie's "relationship"! going to read the next chapter and loving this story so far!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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hehe Albus jinxing Montague's stool to make him fall was a funny thing to read! reading next chapter now to see the development between Al and Jamie!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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this story caught my eye and this first chapter is very interesting! it was interesting to see Albus defending Jamie and her asking him to not tell anything. btw, you wrote 'Scorpious' when it's 'Scorpius'. reading next chapter now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Hi, i just started reading your stor and i think it's really good! And also please update. :)

Author's Response: there's a chapter waiting for validation now!

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LOVED this chapter! it was truly amazing :) really well written and it was interesting to see what was happening from different point of views over a longer amount of time. and Daniel's vision! great idea!
I'm already looking forward to the next update :)

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Pretty dark theme, but I liked the chapter anyway. It's really interesting and I'm curious what's going to happen next. Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! It is kind of dark, but the rest of the story is pretty fluffy at the same time. haha. The story doesn't center around her being raped. It's more about why she won't tell anyone. Thanks for reading!

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