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Review #1, by adluvshp Dobby: A Free Elf
13th December 2012:
Holiday Review Extravaganza Event Two

Aw this was a cute little story. I liked the alternative story of Dobby's freedom provided by you, in a world where Draco & Hermione are together xD

Dobby was quite in character, and I liked that talked like an elf. Draco and Hermione were adorable. The ending made me giggle.

You did have some grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors though (and I am speaking of those not in Dobby's dialogues). I suggest getting them fixed to make this a smoother read.

Apart from that, I liked it. Good work!!

7/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

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