Thank you for this amazing story. You are a great writer and I hope you continue on writing in the future. You have a talent, don't waste it. ;) well anyway, thanks a lot and I enjoyed your story very much! :D
Ida :)Author's Response: This is the nicest review I've ever gotten. Thank you so much Report Review
This story is just so amazing :') I have been crying and laughing all thought it so please write more Jily fic xx Report Review
WOW!! OK let me just start off by saying that your story is absolutely AMAZING!! I can't believe this only have a few reviews?!?! I love this fanfic so much so far! I love reading 'Jily' fanfic and I have to say that this one is AMAZINGLY INCREDIBLE! :D Please keep writing more stories because I would love to read more! I hope this review made you happy :P xxAuthor's Response: It made me very happy thank you so much Report Review
I LOVEEE UR STORY! Marlene and sirius are my favorite couple for hp and I've been looking for more great fics with them and i particularly loveee this one! Keep it up! Report Review
Hmmm...this is very interesting. I'm excited to see where Peter goes from here.
I really like your storyline and your writing style, but I'm a bit disappointed in the length of the last few chapters. They're so short; especially this one.
All in all it's pretty good stuff. Keep up the good work. Report Review
I'm really enjoying your story so far! I like the way you have written all of the characters. I can't wait to read more! Please don't make us wait forever! Report Review
Oh my gosh, first one to review? Are you kiding me?
The story is good, so keep it up!Author's Response: thank you chapter two is in validation and im working on the rest of the story!! Report Review
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