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Wow, this seems like a great start to an awesome story! I love your plot, its quite unique! Your descriptions are fairly good, and I like the way you have crafted your characters. You set the scene of the story really well, and I like that you were able to give the readers all the necessary information they needed to know, without making it sound boring at all. Your narrative has impressed me xD
Anyway, the chapter itself is overall well-written. It is intriguing and the air of mystery and confusion you have maintained is good. I like the way the things are going. I see that the story is headed in a good direction! I hope to come back and read forwards the following chapters soon too!
Keep writing! Great work! 10/10
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! Loving your writing. Please please please continue! Report Review
Interesting beginning! Curious for more :D Report Review
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