This is a really well-written story!! It's so perfectly descriptive of both the surroundings and the characters' feelings!! :D i stayed up all night reading from the beginning, and totally got hooked. i can't wait until the next chapter!! Report Review
Gah I need more more more. Fabulous as always, I'm in love with this story and this chapter filled with awkward silences and tension and subtle touches. Way to make your readers wanting more :) Report Review
LOOL, Hermione's parents are funny, especially her dad! So, i see you have brought in Astoria, i was kinda hoping you didnt, i face palmed, and smacked my head slightly hard, so now it hurts XD OH, i cant wait for the party, seems like a good one!
Draco's really hurt, bless his little cotton socks :3 Cannot wait for the next one, so pleeassee update soon! xxx Report Review
I hope you take this the right way but I think this may have been one of the best chapter you have written thus far. It wasn't as though there was anything particular going on in this chapter but the emotions felt more real and it was like I was actually there in the story in this chapter. I felt the dust on my fingers as I turned the loose door handle. It was great. I liked the photographs at the end of this chapter and I hope it helped hermione get a feel of Draco and the depth of his emotions for her. Great addition!!
Until next time...
Meg Report Review
Excellent chapter!! Please update soon! :) Report Review
Hmmm interested to see where this is leading...update soon! Report Review
NOO, OMG, SHE CUT HIM OFF, GODDAMN HERMIONE! aha, this was an epic chapter, and i was squirming in my chair waiting for something like that (^^) to happen, in my mind, i was chanting ''kiss! kiss! kiss!'' buuut a great author never does the expected!
Once again, no faults! cant wait for the next chapter! xxAuthor's Response: Hahahahah (; I am so unbelievably glad that you enjoyed the chapter! I was actually so worried about what everyone would think of it. And aweh, SlightObsession thank you, thank you, thank you (': You're a dear. I hope to see you next chapter, because, I'm sad to say, things take another turn. Possibly for the worst. Okay, now I hope that wasn't too much of a spoiler. Again, thank you so much, and feel free to review next chapter as well haha (; Report Review
This is brilliant! I don't know how long I can wait for another chapter!Author's Response: Hahah oh gosh, thank you JasminBarrett12! (': Well the next chapter is posted. (Your review made me throw it in the queue as soon as I could.) And I hope to see you next chapter! (: Report Review
Yeah!! Now we know, but two steps forward and one step back. LOL. But I really like the ending with her giving in for a moment to the fact that she liked Draco a lot more than she was willing to tell him. I'm surprised though because she has liked hime romantically for quite some time and then the moment he finally admits it, she is scared and rethinks/overthinks everything. Bah, I kinda want to shake some sense into her right now. I'm like come on girl, he wants you!!! :)
Anyway, I can't wait to see where you go now with this intriguing story.
Thank you for the shout-out. I'm so happy that you find my reviews helpful, or atleast worth something. :)
Until next time!
MegAuthor's Response: Hahaha, yeah I'm sorry about that. (Two steps forward but one step back.) (': Well I'm really glad that you enjoyed the ending. She couldn't stand her guard for too very long, could she? (; Yes, when her feelings were finally returned she completely turned around. Well, more is to ensue next chapter! (I actually laughed at the "I'm like come on girl, he wants you!!!)
And yes, your reviews are wonderful, and it's always lovely to hear what you think. I thought the shout-out was only necessary (:
And I'm glad you are enjoying the story (: (': I hope to see you next chapter! Report Review
Another great chapter...I could visualise the tension between Draco and Hermione really well...like your portrayal of mr granger and look forward to your next instalment.
Thanks for mentioning me ...I really enjoy reading stories on this site and yours was one of the first I read and continued to because it is one of my favouritesAuthor's Response: If you could visualize the tension then I have succeeded (: I'm happy that you like my portrayal of Mr. Granger. I didn't want him to be very quiet like he seemed to be. (In my opinion.) I wanted him more boisterous, and I am glad that you enjoyed it. And no problemo, I love your reviews, and you take the trouble to every chapter, so I just thought the shout-out was necessary. (: I'm so glad that you have continued to love The Reunion, and have kept reading. (: I hope to see you next chapter, and I really hope to see you all the way to the very end. (: Report Review
Wow. And I read this all in the span of two days. I am sincerely looking forward to the next chapter in this work.Author's Response: Hahah I'm glad you are enjoying it! The next chapter will be up in a few days, I hope. Things might be a little slow because I'm trying to work a job in the city as well as school so it's a little messy, but the update should be quick enough! Again, thank you so much for reading and I hope you continue with me until the end. (: Report Review
I have just recently started reading this story, and I love it.
There are very few mistakes, but the one small detail I'd like to point out is the use of the world "vile".
"Vile," means foul or disgusting.
"Vial," is a small container.
That was actually one of the only boldly noticeable mistakes in the writing.Author's Response: Oh gosh, that's embarrassing. Well, I will have to go back and fix that! Thank you so much for pointing that out, and for reading and reviewing, Jeanie! (: It's great that you're enjoying it so far, and I hope that you do so! Report Review
Enjoying this fic but I want to see more relationship between Draco and Hermione...update soon!Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue so it should be up very soon! And haha im so sorry bookworm530, and I hold you will continue reading even if the romance has not really kicked in full swing yet. (: I know you've been reading since the start, and thank you so much for the review (: It's great to hear what my readers are thinking. Report Review
Loved it...I knew I would...yes it was short but you still managed to put lots of description and intrigue in it...can't wait for more!Author's Response: (': Aweh thanks so much. More is up and ready to be read! Thank you for reviewing. (: And I'm glad that you found it enjoyable even with the low word count. I hope to see you next chapter! Report Review
Aww yay, Hermione's parents are in the story! woo! Loved this chapter! I used to lovee Loonry Toons! xxAuthor's Response: Yaay looney toons (: And ahaha yes the parents are in the story! Thank you for reviewing SlightObsession, and I hope you continue reading. Im really glad you enjoyed the chapter (: Report Review
I hope the next one is indeed longer. You owe us (your readers) after that cliffy! :) Other that the great ol' giant cliffy at the end of this charmingly short chapter, (I hope you know I am just teasing you) this was a great chapter. Hehe... I'm still waiting on Draco's true feelings. You didn't think I would forget, did you? :P Though he seem abnormally happy in this chapter!
Nah, I like your story too much. I just accidently missed review that one chapter, you'll be hearing from me again. I hope you update soon because I'm on the edge of my seat.
MegAuthor's Response: Ho ho ho, well his true feelings may or may not have been revealed! And no I didn't think you would have forgotten, and so I am just glad that I didn't have to make you wait any longer. (: And the update is up! And haha Meg you're great, thank you so much for all the reviews.
I feel like I am not responding enough to your review, but I do not know what to say without you reading the next chapter first! But thanks for reading this far, and I hope to see you next chapter! Report Review
update soon, i NEED to read more :)Author's Response: Oh gosh, thank you so much! Well the next chapter is in the queue and so more should be available soon (: But seriously thank you so much for the review, and I hope to see you next chapter! Report Review
I feel like I was teased with this chapter. But I guess I shall anxiously await the next as I did this one! haha. That's a mighty nice banner by the way ;)Author's Response: CASSIE MY DARLING. Yes, I know, my banner is rather breathtaking. I wonder who could have made that (; If it was a person it would get all the. Oh never mind I can't swear on here. (; YES AND I AM SO SORRY I FELT SO BAD WHEN I READ WHAT YOU WERE SAYING BECAUSE I WAS LIKE "...The next chapter isn't worth it. Oh dear." And yes it should be up in the next couple of days since the next three are written! I'm putting it in the queue tomorrow evening (: (: And thank you so much for reviewing. I hope to see you next chapter. :'D Report Review
Please write more soon! It's really good!
~RebeccaAuthor's Response: The next chappie will be entered into the queue tomorrow evening, and so it should be up this in the next couple of days! Thank you so much for reading Rebecca (: (: I'm glad that you're enjoying it and have stayed on board this long :D Report Review
I actually started reading this story with a little skepticism but I have to say that I am actually really enjoying it! I like how you have kept Draco true to his character while also acknowledging that he has changed. I like how it seems like Draco and Hermione are falling in love slowly and that you've kept the mystery that's going on with Draco coming out a little at a time. The only thing that bothers me is calling his shirt a blouse, I don't know why and its nothing to take personal! I'm just weird about that kind of stuff hahaha but overall I'm very excited to see what is coming next!Author's Response: Wow. Maybe it shouldn't, but it makes me happy that you told me how you had some skepticism before starting this story. I'm really glad you persevered and are here now! Haha. Might I ask (And hopefully you will read this.) what made you skeptical? And why you chose to read it anyway? Don't even worry about it, I just want to hear why. I would love you even if you tried The Reunion and it wasn't for you. (But I'm glad it is for you! (: ) And yes I am trying to keep him very Draco Malfoy, but I'm trying to show that he is older, he has matured, and has changed just like everyone else; and it's so good that you think it has come through in the duration of this fanfic. (: Also, yes, I tend to make my characters fall in love slowly so that when they are in love they are sure and there hasn't been any rush. I was worried my readers would find it was too slow, and so it's awesome that it was something you found enjoyable. And once more, yes, I am trying to make the mystery an ongoing and slow sort of thing in order to be the fanfic's back bone. Instead of just making this a romance, I wanted something more, and I was worried I was telling you guys too much too fast and so I am glad you think otherwise! Hahahahahha I'm so sorry about it calling it a blouse, then! Next time I won't use that term just for you. (; But anyway thank you so much for reviewing cass1991! Please review anytime about anything (:
(That part about the blouse actually made me laugh. But I really will try to refrain from calling it that in future chapters!) Also I hope to hear from you soon, and thank you again! (: Report Review
So glad I found your update, been away with no Internet access, anyway missed your story a lot. Love this latest chapter, so clever idea about the smoke and I like the fact you haven't killed hermione parents off...much more to go in this story? Great! I am really enjoying it...Author's Response: Oh God no Internet access? That's brutal. (I think I would perish without my daily Tumblr dosage.) (': Aweh you missed The Reunion. That's so awesome that you missed it and thought about it (: ROPFfRJFP < 3 Yeah, I didn't want to kill of her parents like so many others seem to do! Hermione deserves to have some sort of relation still :o Haha I'm glad you think it is a clever idea (: And YES much more to go in this story. I'm not positive but I think there will be around seventeen more chapters. But again I'm not positive. Let's just say there will be a lot more. (: Yayaya thank you for enjoying it haha (: Report Review
Great chapter!! There is so much information and we finally know what is going on with Draco. Draco finally sat down Hermione a told her the truth. I can't wait to see how things pan out with Hermione's parents and for the relationship between the two to grow a little more.
The letter was perfect. I smiled when I read that.
Great job and great chapter!
Until next time!
MegAuthor's Response: Aweh Meg (': It's so nice to hear from you again. (I was worried you had stopped reviewing D: ) Yes. More is to happen with Draco and Hermione in *SPOILER* two more chapters. And haha yeah you will be meeting the parents very soon! I am so glad you enjoyed it (': I am glad that it made you smile. And yes, see you next time! Report Review
Ahhh great ending, a bit of a filler but made me smile at the sexual tension all the same hahaAuthor's Response: Yes, a filler chapter this was but I had things that needed to be said and such and, anyway, things start to pick up a bit from here. (: Thank you thank you for reading and reviewing. Hahaha yeah the undone blouse. Oh, how wandering eyes do stray. (; Report Review
I was waiting for this chapter, I thought I would leave you one, as I know how anxious you can feel, that's what happens to me.
This is a really good chapter, and it is really informative, I can't wait for Hermiones parents to get to the manor, and I can't wait to see how they react to the whole situation!
XAuthor's Response: Ahaha yeah I love getting reviews and when none are coming in it gets a little terrifying (; So thank you for this. (: The parents are met next chapter! And yayayaya thank you so much you darling person. < 3 Yes. Very informative, and so I hope that didn't make it very dull. Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I hope to see you again in later chapters. (: Report Review
Digging it. Really good chapterAuthor's Response: Ahaha yay I'm glad you're digging it. Thank you (: (: I hope to see you next chapter, and thankyouthankyou for reviewing !! Report Review
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