Hello,

This looks like it is going to be a beautiful story, it is really different to most things here and I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going to with. You've portrayed Aurora (I love the name by the way) really well, she seems slightly disconnected which she would be if she spent all that time practically on her own but at the same time she seems completely honest which is good. I hope you update soon,

InkAndParchment x

P.S. I noticed your penname is IsiEnnaRinna and I was just wondering is that had anything to do with Shannon Hale's books? Which are amazing.

 Report Review

Your story is still really good!
Her name seems to really suit her but I think it would have flowed more if Ginny got to know her a bit before giving her a name.
One thing I didn't get was why her opinion of people was lowered after Albus and James wanted the food. It would be great if you could give us insight into her mind so we can know why she chooses to act that way or why she thinks that because it can get a bit confusing at some points :P
Please, please update soon because this story is AMAZING!
Keep writing,
Emma
7.5/10

 Report Review

Your story is so good! It wasn't
rubbish at all!!
I really like hearing about her backstory
and can't wait to see what she will get
up to at Hogwarts.
Some advice I'd give you is that Albus
and Rose turning up didn't have much
explanation and was a bit confusing.
Other than that, the story has a great
plot and I really want to read more :)
Please please update soon because I
really want to know what happens
next!
Good job,
Emma
7.5/10

 Report Review