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Review #1, by noname Time to tell

18th August 2012:
Epic chapter. I think it was kind of unfortunate that this was all revealed on the same day, though.

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Review #2, by noname Albus' Secret

18th August 2012:
:D Yay. *happy dance*

Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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Review #3, by hushpuppy That Night

26th July 2012:
I like that there's a little mystery surrounding Albus but it feels like you could have stretched it out more. We haven't been introduced to any girls that he could be shagging so the inevitable reveal won't mean much unless it's Rose. And I really hope it isn't Rose 'cause that ship lacks any chemistry whatsoever.

Author's Response: I would have kept the mystery a bit longer but I didn't want the story to drag out for ages and there is only going to be a few chapters :)

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