4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Hermione and George chapter 4: whiskey and water

9th October 2012:
That was great i must say hey you should check out my story its called unexpected blossoming love. Anyway see ya. Lyss :)

Author's Response: Thanks hermioneandgeorge I will once I finish typing chater 5

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Review #2, by Emiilee92 Rise and fall

20th September 2012:
thanks for the ideas thats the general direction i was trtying to head in anyways lol :) i've worked them into chapters 4&5 much love

xxx emiilee

Author's Response: :) :) :) :) :)

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Review #3, by BrokenHeartsMend Rise and fall

20th September 2012:

It seems to be an accident That I have come across this fanfiction as I am not much of a Harry potters fan. Lucky for me that I did, this story is very well written. I was surprised to read it was your first fan fiction.

I hope you continue to write more as I am intrigued about how this story will play out. Thankyou Emiilee, for writing such a fantastic first chapter!


Author's Response: BrokenHeartsMend
thankyou for your review sweety im glad that my story has you hooked, its people like you who push me to write more

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Review #4, by DramioneForever11 Rise and fall

29th July 2012:
I'm new to fanfic as well, and am waiting for my chapter to be validated, so I thought I'd review some other peoples' fanfics. Good start, and I can't wait to see where this story goes. Nice twist, having Ron die. I think you should have Hermione do something unbelieveably stupid, so that Draco finds her. Just an idea :) Hope you have fun writing!

Author's Response: thanks so much for your review i worked your idea into chapters 4 and 5 lol

xx emiilee

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