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Review #1, by Roisin Chapter 1

19th March 2015:
So as soon as I saw this was a songfic, I put on the track. I haven't heard it before, but I'm into this!

AW, I LOVE that Luna interacts with a portrait! I actually headcanon that she hangs out with portraits all the time, and is friends with them, so that made me REALLY happy! (Also, sentient portraits is something people need to talk about more!)

I really like how "pale fists" was nested within a larger sentence of description. You manage to express the physicality without belabouring it, which is excellent.

DAW! You managed to take such a dark arc of the story and put a lot of sweetness into it! Also, I listened to the song while reading, AND I FINISHED READING RIGHT WHEN THE SONG ENDED! GOOD JOB! I usually can't listen to music while I read, but it just fit so well!

Nicely done!
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Review #2, by MissesWeasley123 Chapter 1

19th March 2015:
Oh my god I'm going to yell this was cute I hope you update but anyways, I'll breathe haha :P

Okay, a bit of a confession: I'm madly in love with Luna/Draco, it's always so had to find actual well written fics on them, and I'm so stoked as this is so so good!

The moment it begins, I already have a scene well setted in my mind. Your descriptions were very authentic. Luna seemed very real, and JK Rowling-like to be frank. I love her, and it bothers me when people attempt to write her and they don't do it properly, but you wrote her so so well and honestly, I'm in love with this.

Not only Luna, but Draco too. God, that's amazing. His dialogue and snappy behaviour towards her was very in character, like that moment when she asked him if he was okay, his snappy reply was very real and true to his character.

I hope you continue this fic, I do think you're a great writer. I'd love for longer installments of this. Also, the chamomile was a great touch! :)

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Review #3, by milominderbinder Chapter 1

8th September 2014:
Hiya! I found this story via the forums, and I saw it was a Teagan and Sara songfic, so I decided to have a look because they're my favourite band! This was a lot of firsts for me - the first songfic I've read on this site, the first story about Draco and Luna I've EVER read, and I think you did it all really well!

I love Luna more than words can say but I'm not the biggest fan of Hogwarts era stuff so it's rare I get to read about her. This was a perfect reflection of her personality, and you characterised her wonderfully. She was her quirky odd self without being over the top 'random' like some people write her, and that basic compassion she has for everyone, regardless of who they are or what they've done, is such an amazing trait that really made this story so sweet to read.

Your writing is lovely, too, and well done with working in the song lyrics so well! I just adore this song and I could hear it playing in my head as I was reading, and you really perfectly wrote for the mood of the song.

Thanks for the lovely read!


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Review #4, by BITBIT Chapter 1

16th July 2012:
I liked the story, but you didn't put any of the characters you listed in the story except Luna and Draco.

Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry, the story isn't actually finished yet, so those characters will be coming in soon. It's not a one-shot, so I'll be making a couple more chapters. Thanks for the review :)

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Review #5, by Drunaforever Chapter 1

16th July 2012:
Aw this is really sweet! I enjoyed it, great job with this and I like your writing!
XD Drunaforever

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You just made my day :)

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