I love this! It's so well written :) Please update!

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I really like this fist chapter (:
keep it up x

Author's Response: Thank you. (: Next chapter will be up soon, in the process of revising it currently. :)
- Ria. S2


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Gr-eat job! Your writing style is awesome. After such a long time I see a story which intrigues me, has a great plotline, and which has perfect grammar and spellungs. I wait eagerly for the next chapter, and wish you all the best with it.
Your newest fan,
Dizzy.
P.s. I'm favouriting this. :)

Author's Response:
Hi Dizzy!
OH, YOU. STOP IT, I'M BLUSHING. (':
Megahugs for reading, I'm glad you seem to like the story so far and I hope you stick around long enough to hear the end!
Thanks for the review, too, I love coming on HPFF and seeing new reviews on this story. Totally brightens my day. :)
- Ria. S2

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ah, firewhiskey. the doom of all mankind.
honestly, there should just be a sign over firewhiskey that says: "WARNING: MAY CAUSE YOU TO DO SOMETHING YOU WILL REGRET IN THE MORNING" xD
but btw, if james is still at hogwarts but vita shares a dorm with rose and vita's in seventh year, the timeline technically doesnt work out.
rose is at least a year younger than james (unless you're talking about albus, then they'd be in the same year) so rose and vita would have to be sixth years while james is a seventh.
just saying (:

the last part got me interested.
like the going back in time part haha
update soon (: i love it so far.

Author's Response:
AH. OH MY GOSH. HOW DID I NOT CATCH THAT WHEN I STARTED THIS STORY?
Thank you for pointing that out, would have gone completely unnoticed if you hadn't. I'll go on and change their years, I can't eliminate Rose because she's an essential part of the story. And funnily enough, I was going to write something strangely similar to what you just said about firewhiskey, in the summary of the story! Lol, great minds think alike?
Thanks for taking the time to read and review, I appreciate the feedback so much! :)
- Ria. S2


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This seems really interesting, anything with James Potter (both senior and junior) I like :D
You have really good grammar which is always a plus :D
I can't wait for the next chapter :D
10/10 :D

Author's Response:
Too true, James Potter (I & II) are equally amazing. Next Gen & Marauders eras all the wayyy, just for them! Lol.
Thanks for the review! :) My very first.
- Ria. S2

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