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Review #1, by X_slytherianprincess_X Lily's inner demons

9th August 2012:
I liked it but your grammer needs some work. Also, I think this would be good as a story, not just a one-shot. Obviously, I would want Rose and Scorpius to be together, but I think it would be really interesting seeing Lilly deal with her jealousy.

Author's Response: wow really? I've thought about making it into a story...well if enough people like it then I'll do it. Yeah my grammer is not the best, until I change my computer, I will always rush through these stories, so it doesn't reset as I am typing and I don't end up crying for twenty minutes. Thank You.

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