6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Cleopatraa Double Letters

5th August 2012:
Seeing I havenīt read a single love story for this challenge yet and seeing I had written Helena and Sal and you Rowena and Sal I knew I had to read this. First well done by being able to use five prompts! I thought you did a great job with them. Iīm glad you didnīt make him a monster and showed his human side. I thought the scenery you wrote was beautiful but Iīll admit the thing with the tapestry didnīt make much sense to me.

Author's Response: Haha I think I'll edit that out xD No one seems to get it :P That was just me trying to find a way to subtely tell the reader that Salazar was in Rowena's room... maybe too subtle and possibly not really strong or interesting enough xD I've always Shipped Rowena and Salazar and always saw them having a tragic endig :( I think that a lot of people picture Salazar as a monster, while I personaly can't see that. I see him more as a Draco Malfoy/Severus Snape person. Ambitious, bitter, maybe even a little mean, but mostly misunderstood. I love Salazar! :3

I think a lot of people forgot that all FOUR of them used to be friends... in any case, salazar is awesome, just like his house xD

okay now that I'm done rambling... thanks for the nice review!!^^

xxx

~June


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Review #2, by Lotus_Kiss Double Letters

26th July 2012:
I've always been a big fan of Rowena and Salazar. I could imagine her death being what drove the wedge between what was left of the Founders. This one shot was kind of sad, but well written. I do have to say however the tapestry part confuses me. xD

Author's Response: Me too (hence why I wrote it obviously xD) Glad I'm not the only one (I could've been for all I know about founders xD) Haha, the tapestry was just to say that he was in Rowena's room ;)

Thanks for reviewing! :)

xxx

-June


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Review #3, by Shortie Double Letters

26th July 2012:
OMG! *Sniff* You know I love Founders ans this... This is sooo emotional and sad and lovely!

There were only two or three typos but if you read them again you'd figure them out. I love the plot. I love the way you've portrayed the three living founders. your characterization is perfect. no doubts while reading about the character. Godric is the same hot-headed person his house carried out to follow, and Helena always the cool-headed sensible and loyal one. Well done there.

And I'm glad that you didn't make Salazar a monster. He's not exactly Voldemort now is he? So great GREAT work there.

We should try founders next ;) You're great at this.

*Hugs*

Author's Response: Aww thanks!^^ I'm still working on the prologue from our story, promise! xD

I'm glad you liked my characterization!^^ I've never actually read a founders so I didn't really know where I was going when writing this xD Glad it was well done :D

Aww I never pictured Salazar as a monster! In fact I quite hate those who portray him as such! People (I think, I don't know having never read founders xD) tend to forget that Salazar was their friend at first ;)

Haha sure! xD I actually have a Founders plot that I've never gotten to writing, with a few tweaks it could get interesting and we could work on it together! :D

*returns hug*

xxx

-June


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Review #4, by javct Double Letters

11th July 2012:
Hi there!

I've been reading a lot of founders as of late and they've all been amazing, this one was no different. I, personally, ship Godric/Rowena and Salza/Helga (and I'm a stickler for my ships) but this was good; I think that I am slowly warming up to Rowena/Salazar :D

I loved this story, it's always nice to see a human side of Salazar because in a lot of founders stories, he is portrayed as an emotionless person which really annoys me! So kudo's for writing a brilliant Salazar!

The only thing that I noticed was the speech, it seemed very modern. It's fan fiction so I suppose that it doesn't matter to much but when you're a writing in this era (be it a OS or FF) don't use conjunctions so can't would be cannot and don't would be do not.

Overall, a great story!!
Jas

Author's Response: Okay thanks! I hadn't (had not xD) even thought about that!! :D So thanks for the little tip! ;) I've never written/read founders before so it's nice to get a few tricks :) I'll edit it and fix that! :)

And I'm really glad you liked my Salazar!! :D And that you're warming up to Rowena/Salazar ;) Though Helga/Salazar is a fun ship as well, I prefer Godric/Helga personally... not really Godric/Rowena though... the way I picture them it wouldn't quite work out :P

Anyhow, sorry for my babble! ;) Glad you enjoyed and thanks again for your kind review!! :)

xxx

-June


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Review #5, by lizmusic45 Double Letters

11th July 2012:
This was really, really, really good! I loved your writing style it's so lovely! This is really, really good. I love the whole story, you did a great job with this one.

Salazar was great, I mean they were all great. I'm saying great a lot aren't I?

This was awesome.

Lizzie

Author's Response: Thank you!! You're so sweet! :) I'm really happy you liked it!!^^

Thanks for reviewing!! :)

xxx

-June


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Review #6, by WitnesstoitAll Double Letters

11th July 2012:
Hey there!!

Here as I promised with a review for you. :) I thought this was a good story that made very good use of the prompts you chose. I loved the bit towards the end with all the "who"s You imagery was well executed and I could see the setting as I was reading this. I think that this gave a depth to Salazar that I don't see often (though, truthfully, I don't read much founders) and I felt very sad for him.

Great job!

Author's Response: Aww thank you for your sweet review! :3 I've never read any founders at all so I wasn't sure if this was a horrible clichee or totally new xD I'm glad you liked my Salazar!! :') I'm growing quite fond of him! :)

Thanks again!!^^

xxx

-June


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