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Review #1, by icequeencissa Prologue

13th July 2012:
I really like how this story has started and I can't wait to read more...

Author's Response: I'm incredibly happy to hear so! I am so excited about this story, and I hope you enjoy it as much as I do! Thanks for the review!

xx

Ever


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Review #2, by I_trusted_Snape13 Prologue

13th July 2012:
Asdfghjkl; Oh my goodness gracious! Ever, this is a pure masterpiece! I have never read a story told my Bellatrix LeStrange and I haven't seen many written - but this was bloody brilliant. (Heh, I've been writing to much Ron recently, his vocabulary is rubbing off on me :p.) It's interesting to hear things from her point of view - she seems like an exciting character! This story immeadiatly draws you in and keeps you sucked in until the very last chapter. I literally think I stopped breathing when I finished this! This is immeadiatly going in to my favourites because I MUST know what happens! This is like in Snow White - with the poisoned apple! When I read the summary my first thought was Snow White, but I knew since it was summary I could be mistaken. I'm just so amazed my this. The way you characterize her is amazing - her movements were portayed wonderfully! Gah, I'm in love with this story! You certainly did JKR's Bellatrix justice! Keep it up, I'll be looking for updates! :D
10026984/10 (:

Author's Response: :DDD *is at a loss for words* Hanna, you are the sweetest person to ever grace the Earth and I love you! I love Bellatrix, she's such a complex character and an absolute blast to write! She comes really easy to me, whcih probably isn't a good thing because she IS insane...

I am so excited to write this, and I am thrilled with the feedback you've given! I have recently, as Ariellem puts it, been 'bitten by the Snow White bug' and I had to write this! I have some really big plans for it and I just--gosh, i'm gushing;P

You are the sweetest thing!

xx

Ever


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Review #3, by ariellem Prologue

13th July 2012:
Someone's been hit with the Snow White bug haven't they? Honestly, I'm all for it. So long as Kirsten Stewart doesn't try to act again, she's got maybe one facial expression.

I would suggest a BETA, because while I am a fan of the plot and your characterization there are just a few typos that if addressed would really make you story flow like a river. But on the whole, good job!

Author's Response: *whistles* What? Me? Never!(; Kristen Stewart actually did pokay in Snow White and the Huntsman! I was really surprised! This role fit her much better than Bella Swan! I was pleasantly surprised at this!

Beta...okay, I'll go post a request for one as soon as I finish replying to reviews *sigh* Thank you so much for such a lovely review!

xx

Ever


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Review #4, by Jchrissy Prologue

12th July 2012:
I have been trying to hard to get here and read the first chapter of this, and yay, I finally made it!

Absolutely love the incorporation of Snow White so far! I am excited to see how this misunderstood Bellatrix becomes the crazy killer we know from the books.

I like the little things you did to show her sanity and softer side, like missing her sister, and being pained over her dying father. Yet, you've still made it clear she's a Black through her hatred of mudbloods, though she's nothing close to the woman who laughed about murdering her own cousin.

I wonder what the apple did? Was it her mothers attempt to murder her, but she survives and that's how she turns into the psycho we know and.. well... not love. haha.

Was it some form of magic she bit into that will control her?? Ahh I'm so curious and can't wait for the next chapter!

Your imagery in this is great, especially a sentence up at the beginning about her running her fingers along the wall as she walked. It gave me goose bums!

I love the feel of this first chapter, especially the mean little cliff hanger you left us ;)!

Great job, darling!

Author's Response: Jami, I officially adore you! You are so sweet and I appraciate and look forward to each and every one of your reviews! I cannot explain to you how much your opinion means to me!(:

I love incorporating fairy tales into my stories, haha! This is my second one, and i have another one in the works! Snow White has definitely been my favorite!

Bellatrix comes really easy to me, which probably isn't good because she's insane. But I feel like I understand her character a lot, which makes it very comfortable for me to write her.

I really, really want to tell you what the apple did, but alas, you will have to wait for the chapter to be posted!(;

Imagery! Yay!:D My writing...gave you goose bumps?! YAY *hugs* You are amazing, hun!

xx

Ever


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Review #5, by MagicalInk Prologue

10th July 2012:
Wow! This was such and angst-y first chapter, but not the kind of angst one would expect from Bellatrix.

I'm really interested as to what you'll do with her character. The introduction on top implies she's still not the psychopath that killed her cousin and laughed about it, so I really what to know when that transformation happened. I like that even though she seems to be the saner and kinder in in her family, she still has this vision of 'mudbloods' that disgusts her.

And her mother's and sister's portrayal was really intriguing. Narcissa seems to have been mean since the beginning, and her mother definitely is twisted. I wonder why they hate her so much, it's something really paining to read and the apple touch is so macabre. *shudder*

I can't wait to see how the Snow White tale stays in Bella's complex life and how she changes!
Oh, and by the way, I really enjoyed the descriptions of misery and everything ;)
Val

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I love angst, even though I'm not always one-hundred percent comfortable with it. Sometimes I'm worried that someone will think I'm insane O.o

I have every intention of continuing this, and further explore the characters and the plot I've thrust them into!

Thanks doll!

xx

Ever



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Review #6, by GinnyGryffindor Prologue

10th July 2012:
God, thats so cool. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Yay! My first review on this! I am way excited to write this, so I suspect more will be up very soon!

xx

Ever


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