This is such a gripping and awesome one shot - I love the lead up and tension as we get up to the plot twist about Arabella Figg. This is written from a brilliant perspective - the third person narrative really works well with this story, and gives us a view over a range of characters so we can judge them and have our own opinion about each one. I love the way you had me asking questions the whole way through "What's this got to do with this." and the way it neatly all slotted together at the end. Overall a pure delight to read :)Author's Response: Wow, I have to say this is the most exiting review I have ever had, You don't mind if I copy it and put it on my refrigerator do you. haha I hope you have enjoy what else I have. and I will look over your story soon Report Review
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