Omg I love it. I seen a few mistakes, but they weren't major. Keep it up.Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll try to fix the mistakes ;)
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Poor Sirius! =( He deserves so much more than just a brief fling. The ending made me want to cry for him.
It was such a great idea to have him in almost the category as Snape, always in love with Lily and blaming himself for her death.
You portrayed him so well as conflicted between his true love and his best friend. Him choosing his best friend (kind of) was a great sacrifice on his part.
Lovely story! Truly amazing!Author's Response: I know! Sirius, though he did some terrible things in his youth, deserved a girl as great as Lily.
Thank you very much for all your nice words. I think my head's getting bigger :P Report Review
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