6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by hufflepuffhallows Neville and Hannah

9th August 2012:
This is good! Hannah and Neville is my OTP and I love reading stories about them (as well as writing my own) and today I was scrolling through and I saw this and was like "Ooh yay! More Hannah and Neville stories!"I really enjoyed this, thanks for a great read!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love Neville and Hannah as well, they're super cute together!

Thanks for the review :)


 Report Review

Review #2, by Debra20 Neville and Hannah

13th July 2012:
Heya!

Every time I read a story about battle, be it the Battle of Hogwarts, or any other fighting scene I feel like I've been given a bag of candy. I can't tell you enough how I enjoyed your story. From the thrill the action scene created, to Neville and Hannah's relationship and just the whole big picture of the entry provided me with sooo much fun and enjoyment. Not to mention the great way you handled the prompts. Each and every one of them fitted in as if it was meant to be there. You just made my morning perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks, I was really worried that the prompts wouldn't work out, so I'm so glad you thought I slotted them in okay!

Thanks for making my day with this review! :)


 Report Review

Review #3, by Shortie Neville and Hannah

12th July 2012:
Whoa. I really like this story :D I love the way you've started and ended it. It's short but catchy :D Job well done Jenny *hugs* And I really REALLY like the way you've used the blinding curse (Sorry I can't spell it) Hehehehe

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reviewing! *hugs back*

GO GRYFFIES! :D


 Report Review

Review #4, by ginerva_molly_weasley Neville and Hannah

11th July 2012:
JENNY!

This is so cute my little starry sky munchkin! I love this and I want to munch it because its so cute :D There I said it!

This is so sweet because most of the Neville challenge entries either do it in first person or from Neville's point of view but I love the fact it's from Hannah's as it shows variety but it also shows a different element of putting the prompts into action.

I love the fact it had them in a huge event and then the time skip between then and them getting married as it is so cute and I really do think that it increased my intrigue into the story as I wondered how they'd got from there to being married!

Also the little bit about the baby makes me all squishy inside!

Author's Response: SUMMER!

Thanks so much! I was worried about writing it from Hannah's perspective, as that wasn't very Gryffindor-ish, but I think it turned out okay :/

Thanks for the review! Lots of love, your little starry sky munchkin


 Report Review

Review #5, by Toujours Padfoot Neville and Hannah

10th July 2012:
Hello, fellow Gryffindor!

Wow, what an action-packed story! This was fantastic insight into Hogwarts circa Deathly Hallows while the Carrows were in command. Neville and Hannah's near miss with them was exciting and full of suspense. I like how you chose to view the situation through Hannah's eyes instead of Neville's, as it sets this story apart from most of the other Gryffindor entries. I really love Neville's spunk here, telling off the Carrows. He's so brave and feisty! I also adored the description of the House hangings and how it looked like the badger and lion were hugging. My favorite part, however, was their much-deserved happily-ever-after, with the Muggle church wedding to honor Hannah's mother, and the life stirring inside her. A little secret that the readers know about before Neville does. :)

Really, really well done. I enjoyed reading this.

Gryffindor ftw!

Author's Response: WOO GO LIONS!

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the action, it's my favourite genre, and then I also loved the fluff of the ending :)

Thanks so much for the review!


 Report Review

Review #6, by TyrannicFeenix Neville and Hannah

10th July 2012:
Another excellent entry from good old Gryffindor. We have some truly amazing writers amongst us, and you're definately one of them. Cracker fic.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked my entry, and thank you for the review!

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login