This was a very short and cute story. You had a very ingenious way of adding the prompts in, you know that? Although it would have been nice to see more of the interaction between Neville and his daughter I liked the feeling of closeness they shared, even in such few words. Nice job!Author's Response: Hey! Thankyou so much :D I was having a bit of a block writing this in the first place, so that's probably why it's so short :p Report Review
I enjoyed reading it :) Job well done.Author's Response: thankyou ^__^ Report Review
This story did make me smile I must admit because of the fact it was an exchange between a father and daughter which is rarely seen in the books because Ginny and Arthur don't get much time together and we don't really see Hermione talking to her dad!
I liked the fact that you focused on their 4th year because obviously it was the most jam packed year and Neville was around to witness most of the shenanigans that went on!
I also love the digression on this as it shows just a simple conversation and a snippet of their lives!Author's Response: Thankyou! That's true. I really appreciate the review :) Report Review
Hello, fellow Gryffindor!
I like Suzie and her curiosity and youth. She seems very bright, and reminds me a lot of Hannah. :) This one-shot was short, sweet, and effective. The prompts were rather more conspicuous than they might've been had the story been longer, since they were all quite close together, but nevertheless you got the job done. :)
Gryffindor ftw!Author's Response: Thankyou! :D yeah, Gryffindor for life! Report Review
Nice short and sweet. I could see Neville as that sort of dad. Always worrying about his little girl, but then after some of the stuff he saw happen at Hogwarts i'm amazed he isn't home schooling her. Good work.Author's Response: Thankyou! :) Well I guess it'd be different now, to some extent. Report Review
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