Get on here and update I want to no the ending

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Justso you know, Mother`s. Day is the first Sunday of spring here in englnd.

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Thought i would just review for you, as no one has reviewed this chapter so far. This is a brilliant chapter, the way you have described each person, and their costumes, just brilliant. Hermione's outfit sounds beautiful, i dont know why, but i imagined it, as sort of a ballet style. anyways, this is a brillliant chapter, so THANKYOU!

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate this very much! It is definitely more on the ballet side. Though not so tutuish but more of a flowing style.

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Aw i absolutly loved this chapter please update soon.

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For the name I suggest something not too out there or too modern. Hermione would go with a classic name, I think. Or maybe with a literature connection. Maybe the middle name could be something more unusual.
Can i just say something about the way you described the birth? (Seeing as I have given birth twice ;-) No way would someone have to push for 18 hours. The phase where you have to push is actually quite short, it is only the last phase of the birthing process. A birth can take very long, sometimes it takes ages until the woman is dilated enough, but she does not get the urge to push until the dilation is complete. So, Hermione might have been in labour for such a long time, with contractions building up until fully dilated, but the actual pushing would only have been a short time.

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The only think that irked me a little is that Draco was able to wake up just like that after Hermione had left for St. Mungos, but that's a minor thing. Other than that, it was great! If it's a girl, I really like the name Cassiopeia (I believe that's some sort of constellation) and for a boy Orion or even Scorpius (even though that's mainstream ;) ). Great job with this chapter, I'm excited for what you decide! xx

Author's Response: Cassiopeia! I like that! I will look that up! Thank you! :)

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WHY :( You're really keeping me on the edge of my seat with this story! I think it's got a few more chapters left if you want this to resolve the right way and not too quickly. Fantastic job, keep it up! :) xx

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I have really enjoyed this story, I've not been able to put it down. I can't wait for the final chapter, I need to know if Draco is ok and Hermione gets her happy ending!

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I have been reading this story for awhile now and I love it. It has been the most exciting draco/hermione stories I have read in a very long time and I love it!

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Omg what happened... please say dracos ok! Im really glad they found hermione BUT somethings happened to draco and i need to know what so please updste soon.

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I absolutly love your book please update soon:)

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Hey there! So far, the story is wonderful! I have a few suggestions for you that might improve your writing as well. :) First of all, I would love it if you included some more fashion-y things and add a little more with the Prescott daughters and their interactions with Hermione/Draco. Also, use more contractions--"I'm" instead of "I am", "It's" instead of "it is", etc--just for better dialogue flow since most people don't speak without contractions. Nice cliffhanger too by the way, I love writing them myself because they give me a sense of accomplishment :) Other than that, you have lots of good details :) Good job and keep writing! xx

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you better not take so long to get the next chapter up or so help me I will hunt you down!! I love this story!

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draco is very sweet in this story :D i love the story so much, please post the next chapter soon :)

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Oh my god! I started reading this a few days ago and I hate having no more chapters to read!!! Please please change that and write write write!!!

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IT WAS SO FLUFFY! I loved every girly gushy second of it :D

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Wow that was really sweet :). Also, do NOT worry about your description of the place it was very well envisioned! Very good to have you back and can't wait to see what happens

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it soo goood i love it

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Thank-you so much, you put so much feeling and thought into your words that it became an actual story. :) Thank you very much

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i love this fanfiction! :-) looking forward to upcoming chapters

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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON!!! I don't think I can wait haha:) Brilliant, brilliant story. Thank you for this fanfic!!

Author's Response: You are in luck! There is a chapter already waiting to be validated. It should be up any day!

Thank you so much for reading and most certainly for reviewing!

-- MMM

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I was recently raped (no physical beating thank god)and that was my intial reaction. Don't touch me leave me be then all i wanted to do was be held and touchd by my boyfriend. I thankfully was not pregnant due to the incodent (though hermione may not be so lucky). Good write and nice twist to the plot.

Author's Response: Oh I am so sorry! Thank heavens I have never had to suffer such an experience! But still! I apologize if anything in the chapter was offensive to you! I can only imagine how horrible that had to be! I am glad that you are ok!

And thank you for the review! I see your reviews the most so thank you!

-- MMM

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your hard work paid off that was just the right amount of detail. I could draw from my own memories, to live with Hermione in that moment I loved it.

Author's Response: Oh good! I am glad! I was actually really worried about that particular chapter!

Thank you so much!

-- MMM

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i love this! and the cliffhanger, ooohh

Author's Response: Thank you! It is good to know that you enjoyed it!
-- MMM

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this is one of my favourite fanfics, i'm always exited for new
chapters :-)

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you like it!

-- MMM

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