9 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Rebekah Lou.

25th June 2013:
Omg I have a friend named Scott brown! I like the story so far

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Review #2, by Choconut892 Lou

9th August 2012:
Love this! And my favorite is Ironman,haha:D Update soon:) xx

Author's Response: Yay! Iron Man is in the lead, so don't worry!
And thank you for the comment! It means so much! I'll try, but I'm going away this week, so I'll probably make it up on the ferry ride.

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Asteroid X


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Review #3, by ohmymerlin Lou

8th August 2012:
1. Thor
2. I'M NOT CRAZY MY MOTHER HAD ME TESTED was the quote
it wasn't in caps but I had to do it in caps...
because I'm weird
This was a really good chapter, but maybe you should try and slow it down. I felt the flow of it was all choppy and I had to read it a few times because it was a bit confusing.
But the story is really good, so don't worry. Maybe just add a few more details? It's all very dialogue-ish (that is a word and you cannot argue! :p) and a bit more detail to the surrounds might give the story that extra oomph! :D
Still a very funny chapter, can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Alright, thanks for the review! I might re-read my story over and see if there's anything I can do to fix it. I will also be sending the next chapters to my friend, who is the spelling-grammar-and story writing expert.
I basically needed a plot, that's why I snuck the little thing in there. It's about to get real awkward.
This chapter was basically a filler chapter. It will have more description in the next chapter.
As for the quote: Right! I had just watched a Big Bang Theory marathon and felt like I needed to put it in there.
And, yes, dialgue-ish is a word.

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Asteroid X


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Review #4, by howdoyounotlikeit Lou.

25th July 2012:
Cliffhangers. Oh how I hate them. Iron man better win or I'm gonna hulk-smash someone.
Me likes story!!

Author's Response: Please don't hurt me!!!
It's alright Iron Man's winning.
Lou thanks you for siding with her!!
And thank you for liking it!!!

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Asteroid


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Review #5, by Wonderfool Lou.

17th July 2012:
Awesome!i love the story. Btw how old r u? Captain America anyway. Nuffield said

Author's Response: Captain America is catching up! And sorry I don't give away my age. Let's just say I'm a teen...

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Asteroid X


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Review #6, by Harry_Potter_345 Lou.

12th July 2012:
IRON MAN ALL THE WAY

Author's Response: Don't worry, right now he's in the lead.
And Lou thank's you for voting for Iron Man. And James is sitting in a corner pouting.

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Asteroid X


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Review #7, by ohmymerlin Lou.

11th July 2012:
THOR IS MY FAVOURITE
but if i had to pick, it would be iron man ;D
but captain america is so cute when he tries to keep up with modern technology :')
"it seems to be powered by some sort of electricity..."
excuse my fangirling for a moment :p
this seems like a really interesting story, I can't wait to see where it goes :D
and if you need help with the formatting, there's some staff tutorials :p I had trouble and a staff said to go check them out, it helped me a lot :D
9/10 :D

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much!
If you love Thor, wait for chapter 3. You will be fangirling then.
Don't worry about the fangirling, I was shaking the guy next to me going 'THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER!'
I just put in the chapter, so it will say Captain America: 1
Iron Man: 1
But your vote will be counted at the ending author note in chapter 3.

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Asteroid X


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Review #8, by howdoyounotlikeit Lou.

11th July 2012:
Iron man. He is awesomer than captain America.
And great!:)

Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm trying to get my friends to vote but I only have one friend who I can express my love for Marvel with and she's away camping...
I have an idea on who she would choose though!

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Asteroid X


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Review #9, by Sam Lou.

11th July 2012:
Captain America. He's just that awesome. And he's blonde, nothing wrong with that. (Though i do like RDJ)

Author's Response: OMG! My firsy review! I'm so happy!
I wish I could tell you who I was voting for! Because even though Lou's my character I may not be siding with her... Or James...
*Evil laugh*
So I guess I should start the next chapter then, right?

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Asteroid X


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