I'm loving this story. Please continue to write more.Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing- I'm glad that you like this story. :) Report Review
HOMG OKAY SO I JUST READ YOUR STORY ABOUT THE WEREWOLVES AND HOMG I LOVED IT Asdfghjhgtrewsfgbhgwsfgn wsdfnbm rfgn mnrefgbm
PLEQASE TELL ME YOU ARE UPDATING THAT SOON
your writing is very good, although im not a very good critique (despite being fully british .__.) i loved it, the story just sucked me in as a friend of mine would say, like a black hole, I wasnt even aware of the time as I was reading.
I loved that.just wanted to say that...so um...yeah :D
SORRY ABOUT MY FANGIRLING XDAuthor's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately, this won't be updated in the near future as the story is currently on hiatus, but I'm so glad you liked it! I'm definitely planning on working on Waxing Gibbous, but unfortunately there simply aren't enough hours in the day. :(
It's no problem about the fangirling, and thank you again for reviewing! :) Report Review
:) love this story... Its really interesting...
Is the person the letters writen for Remus??? :O (only a guess)!
Cant wait for the next chapter!! :DAuthor's Response: Hi, thank you!
Yes, the letter is for Remus :P (but Lucy doesn't know that...)
I'm afraid I'm just about to put this story on a TEMPORARY hiatus; it keeps absorbing all of my bad habits for some reason, so I'm just going to work on it and improve it, then update it with an even better version!
But thank you for reading and reviewing! I love that you think it's interesting; that's definitely good motivation to work on it quicker :D Report Review
Hey! Siriusly89 here reviewing as per requested :D I LOVE LUCY! She is so snarky and 'with it' :) An I love the fact that she pranked the Marauders, but it wasn't some big mastermind plan, it was really simple, and that's what gives her an edge :D The last line is hilarious :D I literally almost fell out of my chair laughing :) I am definitely going to favourite this story, and read it when I have more time :)Author's Response: Thank you! I love the fact that you love Lucy!
I know, I have to admit that I quite like that last line myself :P
Thank you for favouriting this story; I hope you'll review the other chapters too when you have the time :) Report Review
Great chapters! Is she gonna be able to get her Mom out of Azkaban, because she woke up? (Or well, her "mom" since she's not technically related.) I hope so. And is Remus the one who her brother bit? Update again soon please, I can't wait to see what happens! =]Author's Response: Thank you for your review! :D
I assure you, although Lucy and Corrie are not technically related, Lucy does consider Corrie to be her mother since Corrie brought her up. More info will be given on this in chapter five :)
Corrie may or may not get released from Azkaban; I haven't written that chapter yet so I honestly don't know what happens. I have a general idea of how I want to take the story, but my muse seems to drag me in the opposite direction sometimes...
With regards to Rory's victim, I can't answer your second question on here as I know some people don't like spoilers, but if you'd really like to know, don't hesistate to PM me!
And chapter five will be up in a couple of days; I'm trying to spread out my uploading a little so that I don't upload all of my pre-written chapters before I've had time to write more chapters ;) Report Review
Hello! Well, you've got a nice beginning here. I like your writing style - you write well, especially dialogue, which is really important. Now, I mean no offense by saying this but the setting for your character is a bit cliche. Her being friends with Lily, Remus and Snape is a bit too much but I don't mind it. Also, her hatred for Sirius and James is a bit overused.
But, there is potential. A potential to be different, so I'd warn you against delving deeply into the cliches. I hope this story has more of a twist to it, something to make it more different than the others.
I quite like it, don't get me wrong. It's just me being a bit of a nitpicking twit. I'll check out the two other chapters ;) Good luck with your writing!Author's Response: Thank you for your comments; I'd love to hear what you thought of the other two chapters too! :)
I'm flattered that you think I write well; to be honest that chapter is one of my favourites.
I understand that you find it cliche that she's friends with Lily, Remus and Severus but that isn't permanent. That's all I'm saying on the matter ;) And I'll watch the Marauder-bashing, although you could put it down to teenage hormones making her feel extra-annoyed at the two of them...
Thank you for your advice; at the moment I'm not too sure where I'm headed with this story since it's been on hiatus for several months, but any suggestions on future events would be greatly appreciated! :) Report Review
Interesting story so far!! I wonder how the fire started! She was bitten right? Update again soon please!! =]Author's Response: You'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out if she was bitten or not! ;)
As for how it started... again, you'll have to wait and see :)
I love that you think my story is interesting, thank you! :D Report Review
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