Wow, what a cliff hanger! sorry i havnt reviewed in a while :) I love Harry's b'day where he stuns ron, that was a really nice touch, and great plot twist with the dursleys- can''t wait for the next chapter! Oh and thank you so much for your comment about my story on the last chapter- that means a lot :D Report Review
hey, firstly, and im not being critical, your chapters do seem a different quality at times, not to be mean, they are all good, but this one seemed more in depth. i love the Remus/Harry relationship though, its almost like Sirius and Harry, but youve not replaced him in any way which is good, update soon!Author's Response: Do t worry about it ! And your totally right ! Sometimes I just rush the chapters cause I want to progress the story but then the quality is not even close to the best I can give ! Thanks for reviewing and update your story as soon as you can ! Report Review
not bad chap, glad they are returning, write faster haahaAuthor's Response: Haahaa, it was bad! and im writing right now :D going to try and make this chapter more better for everyone! there is some action coming soon, so please don't get to bored eh;) Report Review
hahaaa happy new year. Great chapter, love remus's father mode but especially the younger generations independance- love that. Keep writing :DAuthor's Response: Thankyou! its taken me soo long to sort this out, i had to do it on my memo pad on my phone, hahah, still have to atm. Thanks so much and i hope you start writing again soon! you had me hanging on every word of your last story! Report Review
I like this, but you aint updated in agerz, pls do soon!Author's Response: I'm so sorry! and i've just sent a new chapter that is waiting validation xD Report Review
want to read the next chapter, such a good story!Author's Response: Thank you so much:)! and im having troubles with my word document at the moment, so ive had to start writing it on my memo pad on my phone:D its a bit slow, but its better than nothing:)! thnks so much for reviewing :'D Report Review
One of the best chapters yet! I cant wait for the next one!Author's Response: awww, thankyou so much! made me smile;D the next chapter will hpefuly be up ASAP! but im having laptop issues atm:( thanks for the review:'D Report Review
Ouch! Update soon please!Author's Response: Okay;D! I'll try mee best(Y) Report Review
Definitely ok! :D Don't worry, you write action much better than I ever can, I tend to avoid it at all costs, haha. BUt you did it really well, not too long and just the right amount of detail. Keep writingAuthor's Response: HaaHaa, i dont! and good plan:) thankyouu so much! you keep writing too!:D i rely on it;) Report Review
can't wait too see what hapens! and this chappy is a lot better reading, not that your other was bad. when wil next 1 be on?:)Author's Response: Thankyouu! glad it was better:D and i'm not sure at the moment, as i've only just started it :S Report Review
two chaps to read:) and no offence, i can see quite rushed, but still good nonetheles, gunna read yournext one nowAuthor's Response: thanks for the honest opinion:) no offence taken;) Report Review
MORE! And I wana go levsdon studio(:Author's Response: HaaHaa, it was truly amazing ther;D and ill write as quick a si can!!!:) Report Review
nice story so far, when will next chap be up?Author's Response: hopefully be done in around a week:) and glad you like it!! Report Review
Don't worry about the length of your chapters, I don't know how you get them as long as they are, mine never really get more than 1,500 words. Brilliant chapter- keeping the elements of the book but giving it your own twist. but what's with the cliffhanger?? come on- update quickly, pretty pleaseAuthor's Response: hee, aint even started writing the next chapter! ill start now though:D and sorry bout the cliffy;) muhahaaa! Report Review
short but sweet, off to read moreAuthor's Response: Thankss;D! and i'm going to start making trying to make them longer again (: Report Review
Bloody gits those dursleys . . . . .Author's Response: HaaHaa:D definatley;) Report Review
Really liked this chapter, I love the way you combine your own ideas with bits of the original story without it becoming boring and repetitive- Keep writing! :DAuthor's Response: Heee:D thankyou:) and this chappy was bit of a fail, but chapter 9 is already waiing to be validated:')! Report Review
when will next chp be up? luv this story:)Author's Response: Should be tomorrow i think:) and thanks soo much:D Report Review
Thank you so much for mentioning me-that put such a smile on my face! :D brilliant chapter even if you say it's a bit boring. I really like stories that show the normal side of life as well as the action scenes, makes it seem more realistic. Keep writing and I go to Uni next week so sorry if my updates slow down a bit but will do my best :)Author's Response: Thankyou:')! And that's totally understandable, but ill be checking everyday aanyway:D Report Review
I cant wait for the next chapter! When will it be up?Author's Response: Thanks, and I've just started up with school again now but ill try and write as much as possible! Ill try make it longer aswell, thanks for reviewing and shud be up sometime next week:) Report Review
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!Author's Response: Okaay, ill try my best!:D sorry if next chapter takes a little longer, my word thingys playing up, i need to get a new version!:) Report Review
Great chapter, I love how you haven't just skipped over his recovery but have made it a part of your story. p.s. how can you not like fish and chips!? yum yum :DAuthor's Response: Ahhaaa, i'm well picky with food, i barley like anything;) and thankyou, i know im not a fantastic writer and all that, but thanks:) Report Review
not to bad, just need some please !Author's Response: OkaaayDokiee:) Report Review
ouch , this is going to be interesting ! ! ! !Author's Response: I hope so:L ahaaa:) Report Review
Buah! Keep writing please!Author's Response: Ahhhaa, Okiee dokiee;) Report Review
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