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Review #1, by AlwaysSev Angry Red Lines

16th August 2012:
I love this chapter, again. I love that you incorporated Severus! He is the best :) And, you are one of the only authors that can actually write him so I can read him haha! I think he is a tough character, but you did a great job! Poor Tristan! I feel so bad for her, but you have done such a great job writing her through the pain and struggles that she has to face. Anyways, I hope you update soon! Nice job!

PS I love Mayday Parade :)

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Review #2, by AlwaysSev Hogwarts and Talking

27th July 2012:
I really like the beginning of this story, and I really want to read more. Poor Tristan! I think the way you wrote this was perfect for the scenario, I would describe it as dreamlike. It skims the surface, but there is something pulling her back from going too into detail. I really like it because I know that we will find out more, but it is really hard for her to think about it. It made me sympathize with her a lot. Poor thing! I can't wait to keep reading though! I really love the way that you wrote Remus, and hope to see more of their relationship! I can't wait to see Lily and Sev and see how they are worked in either! Good first chapter!

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Review #3, by daliha Hogwarts and Talking

27th July 2012:
I liked your beginning paragraph I think it was the best paragraph. After that when you introduced Remus it was a little confusing.

I wish we could have seen more of her best friends but I guess we'll see them in the next chapter. I'm especially interested in Damien since we barely see Hufflepuffs in fanfic.

Your dropped lots of little hints of what happened to Tristan so to me it was unnecessary to mention it at the end. Also what I'm about to say it's not to be mean but remember you're dealing with an extremely sensitive issue and I think the bottom author's note about the guessing wasn't very sensitive like it might offend someone or give them the wrong message about you, you knwo what I mean.

Good luck with your fic :)

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Review #4, by limwen Hogwarts and Talking

14th July 2012:
THATS IT!?!?!? UPDATE SOON BEFORE MY BRAIN EXPLODES!!! yeah. Update soon please!!!

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Review #5, by Potterpower Hogwarts and Talking

14th July 2012:
Oh my god!!! Please, please, PLEASE! Write more of this story it's amazing, you've managed to work so much into a chapter! I'm hooked, you need to write more, is Tristan pregnant? Is that how the story will pan out? Please I have to know it seems amazing so far pretty please write more I'll cry if you don't!

If I could I would give your story a really high rating like in the thousands but 10/10 will have to do! It's already working out to be one of my fav fanficts so far! I need to know what happened how thing will work out who she will become the closest too, these are the things a girl must know!!

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