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Review #1, by Cannons Keep your eyes open.

28th November 2013:
I don't have the words to express how wonderful I thought this was. As I was reading this I got shivers on my spine. This was truly a beautiful piece one shot. You have added all the small details and woven them in to add an incredible amount of depth in to this. I seriously believe this could be cannon and you have me utterly convinced in to a Ron/Luna shipper.

Your characterisation of Luna was perfect, especially with her chosen choice of flower and her remark about how nearly nobody looks closely enough at anything. I also loved how you made her aware that Ron is teasing her but didn't let it get to her, because she is not stupid after all and she was a Ravenclaw. A lot of people write her and she comes across just ditsy and completely out there, but your Luna was perfect.

I really wish there was more, like I totally and absolutely want more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the amazing review. I'm sorry the response is so late, but I'm sitting here grinning as I'm reading this.

Luna has always been one of my favorite characters, and someone dared me to write Ron/Luna, and this was the result. I hate when writers write off Luna as a ditz or loony. She's so much more than that.

Thank you so much for reading, and I'm thrilled you liked it!

Ellie


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Review #2, by BKL8008 Keep your eyes open.

13th July 2012:
Great view of a different perspective. You write Luna so very well. I enjoyed seeing her viewpoint, as well as it being a pleasant surprise!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :)

Luna is ... difficult, but not as difficult as Pansy, which you'll see some more of later. It was written for part of this triathalon at my main site, (major characters, then minor, then OC's) and one was a picture of this country road. I immediately thought of the Burrow, and then my evil friend had me write Ron/Luna. (who's ironically the same person who had me write Ron/Pansy)

Anyways, I'm glad you liked it. It's different from what I normally write, to say the least. Thanks for the review!

Ellie


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