omg!! cliff hanger! more more more more more!! 10/10!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! We would have more but we have to wait for the validation thingy (I dont think i spelled that right) But we do have more chapters (20...I think maby more) on another website. :) Thanks again! Report Review
keep going!!! more!!Author's Response: Just waiting for our next chapter to be validated! And Thanks again! :P Report Review
still hilarious (is that how you spell it?)
anyways really good writing!Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yeah im pretty shure thats how you spell it :P Report Review
this is good! really funny too!!Author's Response: Thanks! We really appreciate it!! Report Review
From what I have read so far (just the first chapter), you have the start of a really good story!
The only thing I would say is, maybe use less dialogue and more description?
Other than that, I have to say, I am looking forwards to reading more!
Good Luck! :)Author's Response: Thank you for your suggestion! :) Report Review
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