this is such a cool idea! i've always wanted to see how harry potter and the hunger games would be together. i love the idea that harry is actually dead (that sounds mean, i know). but you might want to go through future chapters and check for grammatical errors, because i found a few mistakes.
i cant wait to read more so im going to stop typing now!
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I haven't even read it yet, but it sounds like such a cool concept. I hope your writing is better than Suzanne Collins'.Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you take the time to read it -- I've been trying to put together a good storyline because the mash up is so cliche and I think its paying off well. Thanks for sharing! Report Review
everyone seems so different, but i like it because if Harry had died in the actual books, then i would expect them to be like this!! well done, keep going!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you continue to like it! I did have to make serious changes to the Wizarding world, considering since there was a drastic change. If the Wizarding world changes, then I have to change characters reactions and such, since their world is being affected, they are as well. I don't know if that makes sense xD Hope you continue to read and enjoy! I love hearing from you! Report Review
good story concept, I've always wanted to mix Harry Potter and the Hunger Games together!! keep going!!10/10Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much dahl (: We haven't even gotten into it yet! Report Review
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