Hey, Great Chapter! It's really interesting! Update soon! WildCatAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. Report Review
Hello! True Author with your requested review! =] I must compliment you for your idea and plot. It's a highly difficult to write but still you are doing your best! your story is nice, but you have to do some changes to make it better so you'll get more reviews. I'll give you some suggestions! First of all, I think you should get a little more attractive banner for this story. banners attract readers. then, please state who is talking while writing dialouges, for example- “Yes. I’m Isabella Slytherin.” I confessed/ answered/ said. Otherwise, everything's great! =]Author's Response: Thanks for the review, But I don't exactly appreciate you dissing my hard work on my own banner. I like it, and it expresses my story perfectly. The rest I will work on. Report Review
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