This was really cool! Really fun and playful, showing Arthur and Molly before they had a large number of children (and the twins). I loved that you showed Molly laughing at Bill and Charlie as we really don't see that side of her during the books but you kind of get the idea that she has a lighter side. She did marry Arthur Weasly after all.
I really like the inclusion of Rock, Paper "Skeezers". I find this kinda funny because we say scissors differently with my accent so it really accentuates the Brittishness of the piece.
Good job. I really enjoyed it. Report Review
"Molly verbalized her understanding before neutralizing her hand back into rock to start again." Favorite quote :) hahaha but truly, this was a fantastic one-shot! I love how light-hearted you painted the Weasley family (soon to be clan), and how they decided how many through rock paper skeezers...absolutely brilliant! Great job! :) Report Review
You may love a review but you certainly don't need one. Your writing is excellent.. and to top it off, entertaining as well.
This is an adorable story. I laughed so. Isn't Arthur cute. Isn't Molly the best. Her take charge, disciplinary control compliments his exuberant, contagious, over-zealous (one can go on forever describing Arthur's love of all things muggle!) preoccupation for his little hobby. Yet she is so patient. Arthur's lucky she didn't ask him for a divorce, asking for 5 more babies. Maybe he should try having them! lol MEN!
Can you imagine having 7 kids? I can't.
I love the Weasleys!
Good job.Author's Response: Well thanks, Patty! Yes, I tried my hardest to revitalize Molly and Arthur in younger form, and am so glad that you find it simpathetic.
I can't even imagine two! Let alone seven. I think once may very well be enough to cure me of pregnancy and labor!
This is a lovely review, as always! Report Review
Awesome story! The beginning was hilarious with the telemafones and the mackerwaves. Great job!Author's Response: I could just imagine being on the otherside, in the magical world, scratching my head at all the weird contraptions "Muggles" have created. It's insanity!
Thank you for the review, and glad it made you smile! Report Review
Very very very good! So cute, true to molly and arthurs characters, simple without being boring, and just really sweet! I liked that a lot! Nicely done, friend!Author's Response: Thank you, Friend! I know, it gave me the warm fuzzies when I wrote it too. Report Review
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