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Review #1, by MrsHTX Home and Beyond

9th February 2013:
Lovely story! I especially liked the inventive wedding ceremony and ritual, as well as the way you handled the growing physical relationship without descending into soft core porn. Talent shows! Thanks for sharing this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review.

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Review #2, by _Jo_ Being With You

4th September 2012:
I really need to thank you.
This is the most sweet, beatiful, harmony fanfic I've ever read! It's sheer perfection!
I love the way they're really thankfull for their friendship, for the family they have and for what they've accomplished all those years.
''Honestly Harry, I don't know how you became such a caring person being raised in a family like that." ""You and Ron. Our friendship was the best thing that ever happened to me" I found this lines soo real, so true! And along the others chapters I found others of course, but unfortunately I didn't write them anywhere to put them in this review.
I love the little references to God ( you quoted one of my first passages from the Bibble [1 Cor 13: 1,4,13] ).
I found this fanfic this morning, and read it all day long. It brought tears to my eyes several times, when they're in Australia I actually cried during Harry and Hermione's conversation!
Well I'm sorry to be bothering you with this long review, but I truly hope you read it, because I really felt the need to say all this to you.
From a Potterhead to another: Thank you ♥

And now, I must ask you something: will this really be a 18 chapter story? :c

Please update soon!

All the luck and love,
Joana

~10/10~

Author's Response: Hi Joana.

Thank you so very much for your kind words. I am happy to hear that you are enjoying the story and it touched you. Writing it has lead me down story paths not originally planned. Overall, I'm satisfiled with the results and the magic I experienced while writing it. I am thankful to the author's before me who's works were an inspiration to do a story of my own.

This will be an 18 chapter story. Chapter 17 is in the validation queue now and the final chapter 18 is ready to submit.


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Review #3, by Hannah Vinculi Spiritu

19th August 2012:
What happend to ch. 12?

Author's Response: It got resequenced in the validation input queue. Only one input chapter permitted at this time. It should be validated in the next day or so.

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Review #4, by Hannah Vinculi Spiritu

12th August 2012:
Please write more already!

Author's Response: Having some problems getting through the validation process. More in the next few days.

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Review #5, by 11whimsy Beginning Again

1st July 2012:
Hi there! This is a great first chapter. It sounds like this is setting the stage for a pretty exciting story. I think that if you looked into one of the character's mind a little bit or showed their thoughts it would help develop their character, but that's just a suggestion. I'm a new author, so I don't have a lot of experience! Anyhow, great work. It was an enjoyable read.

Author's Response: Hey there. Thanks for the feedback and comments; they are appreciated. Sorry it took so long for me to respond; I'm new at this too. What you suggest will start to happen. Chapter 1 has a lot of setup in it.

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