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Reading Reviews for Precious Choices
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Frankie05 Precious Choices

28th August 2015:
Hey Alice,

Thought I'd pop by for a quick review :) I love a good Dramione but this one was pretty sad. The beginning started off a bit weird with the secret note. But I can understand how this elusive guy would make Hermione Toss and turn thinking about him.

The charmed parchment was pretty cool magic. I thought he had to be in the room for that but it acted like a texting service. Pretty interesting.
Was the fact she was wearing green planned because it was Draco she was meeting? If not- what a nice coincidence. But she goes anyway. I think it was probably her curiously and her courage that let her go that night.

How did you get by the arranged marriage law from tos? I might not be well versed in tos but I didn't think arranged marriages were allowed if both parties didn't want it. I'm not familiar with that rule so I should go back and read it :)

The scene in the room of requirement is steamy. Like really steamy. Whoosh.

One of the things I noticed is that Hemrione probably would have gotten her NEWTS- and they would have been Outstanding - not exceeds expectations. Just to warrant the "of course" reaction. But that's really all I noticed

Great job,
Frankie

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Review #2, by Lily Snape Precious Choices

18th November 2012:
Alice,

That was a fantastic story that I enjoyed very much. If it possible to edit your stories though i would suggest changing the O.W.L.s. to N.E.W.T.s just for the sake of the story. Again thank you for your fabulous song fic. I Loved It!

Author's Response: Sorry for the long hiatus! You're very right. It should be the N.E.W.Ts and I've changed it. I'm starting to post the sequel now if you're interested! It's called 'A Lifetime of Choices'. Glad you enjoyed the story!
AliceLupin


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Review #3, by Melinda Precious Choices

14th July 2012:
Wait a minute... I thought Draco's middle name was Abraxas? Draco Abraxas Malfoy, named after his grandfather.

Author's Response: It is but I changed it. No real reason why. It's the same in the sequel, 'A Lifetime of Choices'.
Thanks for reading!
AliceLupin


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Review #4, by Sarah Precious Choices

25th June 2012:
AH...this was so good!!! I can not believe you left it like that! She needs to tell Draco...stop the wedding and make it right.

Author's Response: Sorry for the long hiatus! I'm starting to post the sequel now! It's called 'A Lifetime of Choices'. Glad you enjoyed the story!
AliceLupin


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Review #5, by 567random Precious Choices

25th June 2012:
Awh, that was so sweet! Please do make a sequel, I would love to read it!

Author's Response: Sorry for the long hiatus! I'm starting to post the sequel now! It's called 'A Lifetime of Choices'. Glad you enjoyed the story!
AliceLupin


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