I feel so bad for her. Fred is the boy she's in love with, yes? It was a tad confusing, but I absolutely loved the story. I couldn't help but wonder why she didn't go to Fred and break up with James, if they were indeed dating.
The relationship between Roisia and Freddie was so cute. They really did seem meant to be and I was pulling for them to be together. She really deserved it.
Regardless, it was a very sweet and lovely story. A well deserved 10/10! =)Author's Response: She and James weren't dating, she thought she loved James but it was really Fred. It's meant to be a little confusing so people can make their minds up about what they think should happen but I think I'm going to tie it in with my other story so it links a little bit.
Thanks for the review!
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