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Review #1, by Pygmy_Puff_32 A Plan

23rd July 2012:
This has a very good story line, i think it was better without the third person, like it was in the first chappie? But yeah, It would be good to see where this story ends up. Maybe it could even have an epilouge?;) Update soon! xx

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm working on the next chappie, but I'm also trying to figure out the plot for the rest of the story. I've got some ideas to sort through, but I promise that I'm working on it! I will also keep your third person suggestion in mind as I'm working on the plot.

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