7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by bookworm530 Seeing forgiveness

28th July 2012:
Thanks for the update! Draco's behavior seemed very OOC but I still enjoyed this chapter. Interested to know what he sees in the mirror and where this story leads...update soon!

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Review #2, by Rosella Seeing forgiveness

27th July 2012:
This is a really nice story you should continue it for sure! Please update soon!!

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Review #3, by bookworm530 Seeing pain

4th July 2012:
Yeah for an update but it was way too short! I want to know what Draco sees in the mirror...please write more soon : )

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Review #4, by Dashaaugust7 Seeing pain

1st July 2012:
It's good but I thought you might like to know his name is Blaise not Blaze

10/10
-Dasha

Author's Response: I know, I didn't notice the auto correct had changed his name until after I uploaded it :/

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Review #5, by bookworm530 Sees loneliness

25th June 2012:
Hmmm interesting start...can't wait to see what Draco sees in the Mirror of Erised. Update soon!

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Review #6, by sarahkay502 Sees loneliness

25th June 2012:
Great start!!! I can not wait to see what you do with this story. I have not ever read anything that had to do with Draco finding the mirror and seeing his deepest desires. (I think that is what you were mentioning in the intro). Good luck with the story and I can not wait for your next chapter!

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Review #7, by Dark Whisper Sees loneliness

25th June 2012:
XxBeyondChapinxX,

Ah, the mirror of Erised... a wonderful Rowling creation that I absolutely love.

This is a great first chapter and nicely descriptive. I really loved the line where he is thinking about the trio... "What was so great about their lives anyway?"

I liked it because his was the life that was supposed to be great... seemingly having whatever he wanted, so it is difficult for him to see what was so great about theirs... seeming to have nothing. I hope that made sense. :)

Anyway, best wishes on your story, dear. You've chosen a wonderful magical element to write about... and a Dramione no less. :)

Dark Whisper

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