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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Mitch Guest

13th May 2013:

You had me hooked in the first chapter, I was skeptical about the death of Ginny, however you have made a brilliant start to an addictive story and I'm very keen to continue reading and thank you for putting your time and effort into this spin-off novel

Author's Response: Thank you so very much, so far it has not been easy writing this story but I am loving every minute of it. I will hopefully be updating soon, so be on the look out.

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Review #2, by markdbailey01

Revelations

19th April 2013:

I am really enjoying this story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I will add another chapter soon.

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Review #3, by markdbailey01

I will be their Grim

1st April 2013:

I really like where you're going with this story. You write very well and I am really enjoying it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, i'm glad you enjoy it!!

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Review #4, by 11whimsy

A new world

1st July 2012:

Hello! This is a great first chapter, I really think your premise is creative and original! (And considering how many stories there are on this site, originality is hard to come by!) The content is great, the only suggestion I would have is to try to put in more paragraph breaks, the text is really small and the big paragraphs are hard to read visually. Great start! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! and thanks for the idea, i will try to transition that into the next chapter. Thanks for reading, the next chapter will be finished soon.

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