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3 Reviews Found
Review #1, by American Ginny Escape
16th July 2012:
Hmmm well I loved the plotline, but the story structure was very choppy. I also thought if you had started earlier or explained more of what happened between them, it would have help connect the read to the character. I like what you have here. it is really good, but you are telling me a lot of things not showing me. Take the extra time to describe her tears or the feel of her heart being stabbed when she hears the voice. I think if you take a little more time to expand this story it could be awesome rather than good. Just some friendly criticism. Overall, well done.

Love,
Am.Ginny

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Review #2, by annabelle granger Escape
25th June 2012:
This was a really good piece of writing. I am an HHR fan but I love sad stories like this. Harry was always capable of breaking Hermione's heart and somewhere deep down I believe that he actually did break her heart by ending up with Ginny.
Sorry for the rambling. This was really good. Keep it up :D

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Review #3, by Miss Haggan Escape
24th June 2012:
WOW short but powerful, poor Hermione.

Well done a very good, quick we read.

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