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Review #1, by luvinpadfoot The First Kiss is Always The Best

18th July 2012:
Aw, it wasn't too short! It was just the perfect amount, and sweet too. First kiss scenes are always the sweetest to write.

Oh Luna made me laugh so hard. I was seriously cracking up when she interrupted them. It's so typical of her to do something like that. I'm almost surprised she didn't warn them about nargles or some other such nonsense!

Their argument at the beginning was very well done. The dialogue was quite good and didn't feel at all forced or awkward. It seemed very real, which is difficult in dramatic arguments. I could picture them perfectly in my head from your descriptions.

Such a lovely one-shot! It made me go 'Awww!' just the perfect amount! =) Nothing's better than a well written Harry/Ginny.

Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry for the slow response! This review means so much to me!!! Originally I had Ron interrupting them, but I couldn't get it to seem right, so I put in Luna instead!! It seems like I made a good choice! Thanks again!

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Review #2, by worship the nargles The First Kiss is Always The Best

25th June 2012:
Good job! i love H/G story's and i won't go hard on you because you did awesome for your first time! :)

LOVE IT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

-WTN

Author's Response: Thanks!I wanted to try something different, and I've always supported H/G the whole way through HP!

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