This is brilliant! Please update soon! How many chapters do you think its going to be? :D Report Review
hahahaha poor louis xd looks like a fun story, please upload soon! Report Review
I like this storyline. It's fun and light and not to serious. Please please please update asap and I will leave you a review for each chapter. And what pairing is this story? Report Review
update... update...update...update... update... in case you were wondering i'm trying to hypnotize you to... update... update... update... cuz ya know this the best story ever so... update... update... i'm going to use up all my 6000 characters i have in this review box until the message gets across so... update... update... update... update... visualize a swinging pocket watch as I hypnotize you to... update... update... update... update... update... update... update... update... update... update... this better work cuz this is taking forever so... update... update... jeezus 6000 is a big number... update... update... update... update... i'm officially at 5334 now... update... update... update... this getting tiring... update... visualize a bunch of other... updates... as many... updates... as 5197 characters would need because my fingers are starting to cramp and the word... update... is start to look like it's spelled wrong... update... visualize your computer and the next chapter of girl being... updated... update... update... update... so in conclusion to my hypnosis... UPDATE! teehee:) Report Review
Ah i was laughing my head off! Exactly what i would have done in Kenzie's shoes... What i did do come to think of it. My boyfriends best friend kinda has a squint nose now. Report Review
finally a new chapter! i love mackenize, she's great :) can't wait for more! Report Review
This sounds so good! Can't wait for the next chapter! Report Review
ahhh I really like your story~ keep going ^^ I want to see how it turns out or if one of the guys fall for her :D Report Review
ooohhh this seems interesting! I'm a bit confuzzled to why Dom is acting like such a princess, but I'm sure it will all be revealed soon? :D great opening chapter :D 10/10 Report Review
Great first chapter!! Report Review
Ohh cool...i like all of your stories, though this is the first time i'm leaving a review...i think. Anyway, I love Kenzie's character, she actually reminds be of my sister, who behaves like a boy all the time. Naturally, I have to act like Dom and put my foot down. :D I really love your writing style, its careless, fun and independent...like a refreshing spring breeze. Keep up the spectacular work. Oh, and I wait with anticipation for chapter two...it sounds like, real funtastic. Cheers, -Dizzy. Report Review
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