Ooh, I've never read a Harry/Hermione before and you pulled it off quite well! You actually had me believing in their relationship, which is always an accomplishment. The two characters, as you had them written, actually fit very well together in a romantic sense!
And the plot was cute as well. The two of them working together just made the whole thing seem very sweet. =) I'm sure they make an adorable couple.
I love how it's so subtle at first that we almost don't know it's a Harry/Hermione, and then hints are dropped and it becomes clear. It was genius the way you did that!
So fantastic story! I think it stands alone quite well as a one-shot and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!Author's Response: Thanks! I've never had such a positive review before :) I've had a few ideas about how they would tell Ron... but I'm not sure if I'll post it or not. Thanks again! Report Review
Yay! Another Harry/Hermione story!!! I love it! The only thing I wished was that him asking her out wasn't so sudden (but that's only because I love reading anything about them as a couple, and I didn't want to finish) Great job!!! :)Author's Response: I made it so sudden because Harry never seems to think through anything, he just rushes in. But I'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
great story! loved it, please keep writing more Harmony :)Author's Response: okay :) I'll have a crack at it and see what happens. won't be updated for a while though because I'm working on several stories atm. thanks :) Report Review
Excellant story, would be interesting to see more.Author's Response: thanks! I have a few ideas of what could happen when they tell Ron... but not sure if I will take it any further. Report Review
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