Its really good. Maybe you could add a few more details in? other than that its fab :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I know my writing is sometimes lacking in detail. I'll definitely try and add some in. Thanks for reading and reviewing! (:

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Please continue the story! I would love to see what this leads to.

Author's Response: I will, I promise! As long as everyone keeps reading, I'll keep writing. (:

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Awww! that is a very sweet first kiss for both of them! Please keep writing!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment! I will definitely keep writing, no question. (:

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Seriously, the writing is just fantastic. Your words flow together and there's an obvious plot forming.

Author's Response: Nice username, kiddo. Thank you. I'm so glad you're reading(:

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Ah!!! They kissed! lol! This chapter was very sweet and I can't wait to read on. This is a plot I have never come across before and I'm very inrtigued! It's only the third chapter and I'm hooked already which is a sign that you are VERY TALENTED! I expect more 'Fremione' in the future chapters and honestly will be checking frequently for an update on this story! You are doing a fantastinc job so far! Keep up the excellent work! Jenna :)

Author's Response: Jenna, you never fail to review and that's why I love you. XD Yes, yes, they kissed. And there will DEFINITELY be more Fremione later, you can count on it now that the story's picked up. Thanks for reading! (:

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Great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Keep up the fantastic work! I'm enjoying this story so far and can see a lot of potential in it! Jenna :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Jenna! I will definitely write more(:

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I think I know what he's planning. ^-^ write more soon, please!

Author's Response: I will as soon as the staff vacation is over, promise. Keep reading! (:

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Hey it's the first chapter it's not going to be filled with drama! It's just introducing the story and you've done a great job at it! Love the pairing and loved the hear- to- heart, it was really sweet and I like that unlike other stories you haven't tried to rush them into anything so very well done! If there was anything to correct I would put it in this part of the review but there really is nothing to be improved here which is excellent on your part!Fantastic job so far and I look forward to reading more in the future! You can expect more reviews from me as the story continues! Keep it up! Jenna :)
ps. if you ever have a spare moment of your valuable time could you please check out my fic which is a George/Hermione and it's called 'A Building Love'! Thanks very much and well done so far with the story! By the way congratulations on the first review on this story! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will be writing more, I promise - I've already got about six chapters down on paper. I will definitely check out your fanfiction, you can count on that.
Thank you so much again for your time, and I look forward to hearing from you in the future! (:

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