Finally, time to leave you a review! *Butterflies of assorted colors pop out of nowhere*

M'kay, so first off, I would like to apologise for never leaving you a review this past month. I feel downright awful, because you've been leaving me lovely reviews and I haven't had the time to come around and review your work. So, I'm BACK :D

Two words:

Drunk Lily.
I love drunk Lily, she's such a joy! She's just so happy, and she seems like a pretty cool drunk. I don't know if I could hang with MJ though. She seems...too eccentric for my taste. She's too out there. and Green lipstick with red and blue dyed hair? I can only imagine her midlife crisis. *shivers*

And I love how Glitter is mortified with drunk Lily. And how he comes up with such cool ideas, like starting a bakery, and how he has a feeling for doing math. Only cool people can spontaneously declare they're in a mathy mood at 11 in the morning.

And I'm so happy you updated this story. It makes me so happy!

:D

Author's Response: I'M SO SORRY FOR HOW LONG THIS TOOK ME TO RESPOND TO! LIFE IS SO UGH!

*dances with butterflies, while random jazzy music is playing in the background*

Don't worry about not reviewing, I'm hopeless at reviewing AND responding! *slaps forehead*

Yes, when Lily's drunk she kind of just let's everything go and she's not over-dramatic. She's a hyena drunk. :p

MJ is a bit wacky, but she's loveable! ;)

Glitter is perfect, I've said this before and I'll say it again. I love Glitter! :p

Update will definitely not be before the queue closes and I have to upload two one-shots before I can update this... but there will be an update, one day... :p

Thanks for reviewing, you made me really happy! :D

HAPPY HOLIDAYS! :D

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Once again, this is an awesome chapter!
I LOVE Glitter. He is just so perfect and I just want to read more of him!! He is definitely my favourite character and I reckon it would be awesome if you could somehow bring Dudley into it (Glitter is the son of Dudley, isn't he?)
Lily was funny when she was drunk, especially when her parents came over-I'd also like to read more about Harry and Ginny.
Good job on this chapter, I hope you update soom!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

Yes, Glitter is the son of Dudley! ;) He'll be in later chapters though, I'm intrigued to see what everyone thinks about him! :D

Don't worry, so many more characters are going to pop up soon, we're only in the beginning! :D

Update may take a while, I haven't got one word and I have no time! D:

But when I write it, I'll try and post it as soon as I possibly can! :D

Thanks for the review! :D

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Just a little fact check, when you're drunk, you can drink two litres of coffee and it still won't make a difference. You will still be drunk. Drinking water would be better. Other than that though, great chapter!

Author's Response: But coffee can TRICK you into thinking you're sober and that's what I was really aiming for, Lily was far too gone (hehe) and she needed to try and trick her parents. It also (kind of) takes the smell of alcohol of your breath away.

But thanks for the fact check anyway! :)

Thanks for the review! :)

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Yay, an update!
Glitter is so awsome, I wish I had him here (:
Loved all the stuff Lily said that James did, and their relationship is adorable!
And Lily found a job! that's great, and Hannah is really nice and funny (spit- burgers!)

Author's Response: Yes! An update! :D

ahahaha I love Glitter far too much, he's such a blast to write! xD

I love close relationships between siblings, it's always so sweet! :p

She found a job!! :D It's only temporary, but she'll be getting some money. :p

Thanks for leaving me this review! :D

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Hey! Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying the story so far, and I hope you update soon. I haven't really read any next-generation post-Hogwarts stories up until now, and I think this is a really good idea! I love how you have made all the characters personalities so different. It adds loads of interest and makes me want to read more!

Author's Response: Hi there! :D

I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying the story! The update may take a while because I haven't written anything yet and I have a pile of school work. :/ I'm meant to be doing an assignment right now actually... :p

I am trying to make this un-cliche as possible, glad to hear that it keeps it interesting and not even more Mary-Sue-ish! :p

I will try and update soon, I just have a lot on my plate right now. :/

Thanks for reviewing! :D

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James really does sound like the worst person to live with. I wouldn't want my owl, cat or myself in the same household with him.

Great job though!

Author's Response: ahahaha but you gotta love James! He would be fun to live with but you'd have to be very patient. :p

Thanks for reviewing! :D

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YES! AN UPDATE! *waltzes around like a zombie on crack* (yes, this chapter made me oh, so very happy!)

So I think I'm undergoing relapse because I'm putting off homework for fanfiction...again...and your updates aren't helping it stop either. (Not that I'm complaining, you're one of my favorite authors on here, so do keep bringing updates in!)

Anywho, on forward with your review!

I have no clue how many times I have to keep mentioning this, but Glitter -- Oh gawd, how much I love him! He's got spunk. He's got style. He's EVERYTHING. O_O
Why can't boys be like him?!?
I just can't help but wonder though, how in the world did such a lovable character be the spawn of Dudley? (He is Dudley's son, right? If not, please 'scuse my mistake) Because Dudley's none of the above. He lacks style. He lacks spunk...he's just...not beautiful like Glitter. Glitter's like, the miracle child. He's friggin be-a-utiful.
And his 'lucky heels'. Oh Glitter, you have it going on! :D

And I love Lily's relationship with James. It's so sweet and adorable. I wish my older brother was here to share that relationship with me, but that's a sad story for a rainy day. This is NOT going to be a sad review, because this story makes me want to barf rainbows!

And Lily! She got herself a job! And about time too. I applauded her for her achievement! I'm so proud of her! *tear* :')

I can't wait to see how her work's going to go. At least she won't be just sitting around anymore eating Nutella all day, but who could blame her? That chocolate shizz is UH-MAY-ZING! Dang it. Now I want Nutella...

And Glitter. I'm hoping to see him in the next chapter. I love him too much! It's not healthy, but then again, my whole lifestyle is warped.

So,
I'll keep a heads up for an update, so I'll see you again shortly! *waves hand in farewell* :D

Lovely chapter as always, btw :)

Author's Response: HELLO THERE!

ohmygosh, I'm sorry I don't mean to put you in relapse! D: The bad/good news is I actually have no more written chapters of ANYTHING so now I actually have to write but I have no time to write.

BIG DILEMMA.

Glitter is just perf. omfg I love writing him. He's like the essence of fabulous. If all boys were like him, we wouldn't be alive because they're all gay and therefore unable to reproduce. :p

He is indeed Dudley's son, but you have to remember Dudley had that loveable kind of interior and he also would have had to have a wife to create Glitter, so she's very open and flamboyant like Glitter (sans being a boy).

Ahahaha, lucky heels, I didn't even plan that, it just came up. :p

LILY GOT A JOB WOOO. Maybe next chapter she'll start working. Although it's only a temporary job, just giving you a hint at future chapters. ;)

I think Glitter may have to be in every chapter, I adore him too much not to put him in every chapter.

I think everyone's lifestyle is warped here, we're all a bit loopy. ;)

Hopefully the update won't be too long (but it's highly doubtful) and hopefully you will see me shortly (maybe me in your Unanswered box soon, keep your eyes peeled!)

*waves hand back*

Thanks for another lovely review! ♥

p.s. sorry if this makes no sense, I'm meant to be asleep but I have to type this so I'm trying to type softly. :p

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Aw
this chapter is so cute, I had a smile on my face almost all the time I was reading it! (:
Al, James and everyone are so funny, and I loved it when Lily said "dollop-head"... And Glitter is awsome, and Ginny is awsome (she sent Lily a howler saying have a good last year!!!), and Lily is great (she seems so real, I like it that she's struggling to find a job, and doesn't magically have one...)!
Please update soon (:

Author's Response: Ahahaha glad you liked it! :D

"Dollop-head" is actually one of my favourite insults (mostly because of Merlin) and Ginny is awesome. I think they would have had such a close bond, being the youngest of brothers. So I wanted to show that! :p

Update is in the queue actually, it might be validated in about three or so days (provided that I've followed the ToS.)

Thanks for reviewing! :D

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SECOND CHAPTER! Still very good! I like how the plot is beginning to form! Just one question.what is croquemebouche? anyway :) Very good! If you ever need any more reviews, you know where I am :)

Author's Response: Definition of croquembouche: A decorative dessert consisting of cream puff pastry and crystallized fruit or other confectionery items arranged in a cone and held together by a caramel sauce.
Adriano Zumbo, one of the most amazing chef's on the planet, makes it - it looks so delicious to eat! If you look it up on Google images, you'll see the big thing it is! :p
Anyway, I'm glad you liked the story - I'm kind of enjoying it! :)
Thanks for taking the time to review my story! :)

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Hey! Siriusly89 here reviewing as requested! I'm SUPER sorry about the mix up!!! Buut I'm finally here, reviewing the right thing :) I really love this so far! I like how Lily isn't 'little Miss perfect', and I just adore Hugo and Glitter :D I just found one tiny grammatical mistake, there's a place where instead of the word 'he' there's just a 'h', but apart from that, the grammar is perfect :D ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER !

Author's Response: Hi there again!
It's okay about the mix-up, anyone could do it! :)
Oh the grammar's perfect you say? That's excellent! :)
Ooh, I'll fix that mistake right away, thanks for pointing it out! :D
Thanks for reviewing! :)

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Lily's life just sounds super right now. Being woken up via tickling torture, no job and her gay cousin is forcing her to do some kind of bucket list.

Good job so far! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Lily's life is super! ;)
Update may take a while because I will be starting school very soon and it will be the most important year EVER so I need to concentrate heaps on my studies. D:
However, I will try and get it in soon because I already have it written! :D
Thanks for reviewing! :D

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I like it so far! I usually don't read fanfictions written from Lily's point of view but this one works.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I hardly ever read about Lily as well, I thought I'd give it a go! ;)
Thanks for reviewing! :D

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LET ME LOVE YEW!

M'kay, so first thing's first. I litterally squealed when I saw that there was a chapter update for this story. I was looking up pictures of crazy people on the internet to sketch, when I thought, oh, what the heck! Let's see what HPFF is holding as golden treasure for me today! And so, my adventure started, and then I clicked on my favorite stories list, and WHA-BAM! Right on top was "Naive", and I danced a little jig on the tiny clean spot on my floor, surrounded by shoes, crayons, markers and posterboard! I. Love. You. *sends a pedo-bear face*

Anywho- on with the actual review!

One word: Glitter.

Oh gawd, how I love him! He's just so beautiful, or should I say, B-E-A-UTIFUL! His gayness makes me so happy, and I love how he cares for Lily. And him being sneaky with Drew! Mwahahaha! That little sneak. :3

And I like Lily's insult. Dallop-head. It's cute and juvenile, which matches her personae. Very youthful. And I can totally understand her when she talks about being tickled. Honestly, I just hate it when someone comes up when you least expect it, and all of a sudden, their fingers are all over you. *shudders* It truly is like rape...just without the penetration.

And I wish I had a brother like Al. He seems like the best. All my brothers are meanie heads, and I'm the oldest, so it's just as miserable.

Anywho, marvelous chapter. And I shall await the next!

Author's Response: I ALLOW YOU TO LOVE ME.
LET ME LOVE YOU.
I get like that too when I see a fic being updated - sometimes I'll dance around happily. :p
*sends pedo-bear face back.*
Oh gosh, I love Glitter as well. He's so much fun to write!
I'm so glad you love him! :)
Dollop-head is actually from the show Merlin, my mum and I quote it all the time! :p
I hate being tickled with a burning passion - it's the worst sensation ever. I've nearly wet myself because someone tickled me that badly! It was awful!
I have a younger brother (only 2 years apart) but when we were little we always were fighting. Now, we're at lot closer. Although I wouldn't let him attack me like Al and James! I'm small but vicious! :p
The next chapter may be a while because school will be starting soon and it's the most important year for me, I'll update whenever possible but I'm warning you now that it may be a long time before you see me active again. :(
Thanks for leaving me another lovely review! :)

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OH MY MERLIN!

Okay, this is like, the third story I've read from you without even noticing, and I have to say, you're now one of my favorite authors! I just love your style of writing and they're all so funny!

Now, about this story. I just had to click! The summary for this story was just way too enticing to pass up. And may I ask how Lily is related to Glitter. I know that they're second cousins, but the question is, how? Not that I'm complaining, I freaking LOVE Glitter!

And I love how you characterized all the Weasley-Potter Next Gen. They were superbly written, and their traits seem to match them well. They're all unique. And I love how you're narrating with Lily's P.O.V. I love Lily centered stories for some reason. This was great!

All in all, I just need another chapter! I NEEDS it! Pretter, pretty, PRETTY please? Even though the 'prettiness' of please probably has no effect on anything! I will be waiting for the next chapter.

*lurks sneakily behind a corner*

Author's Response: sjckjsdvjd YAY! Another person added me as a favourite author! :D
I'm so glad you love my style of writing and my humour! In real life, people always say I'm lame! D:
Lily is related to Glitter because he is Dudley's son! ;D I love Glitter as well, he's just so fabulous! :D
I'm glad to hear I characterised the next-gen characters well! I always get nervous when writing them. :p
The next chapter may be soon! I don't know whether to post this chapter next or another one of my WIPs or I may be submitting a new story for a challenge. SO MANY DECISIONS!
Anyway, thanks for leaving me this lovely review! :D
*gives you food, blankets, water in case you lurk for too long.*

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It was really funny! Lili and everyone seem to be cool... Is Glitter Dudley's son?! when I read about him being a muggle that's what I thought and I kept imagining Vernon's face when he looks at his grandson (:
please update soon (:

Author's Response: Ahhh, thank you so much! You're my first review on this story! ♥
Glitter is indeed Dudley's son. I could always picture him as being gay and I haven't seen it anywhere so I just had to write about him!
Vernon's face would have been hilarious but I think he would eventually get over it. I'm sure Dudley would set him straight! :D
Are you by any chance the same 'lol' that keeps leaving lovely reviews on a few of my stories?
If so, LET ME LOVE YOU! *chases trying to give you a massive hug*
ignore me, please.
Update shall be soon! I have quite a few things to put in the queue but I will put this one in as soon as possible! It is currently third on my checklist! :)
Thanks for reviewing! :D

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