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8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by The Basilisk ONE

21st December 2015:
I'm so sorry it has taken me so long to get to your story in my tour of the archives. My tail got stuck in the lassst story I read, and it took forever to get it out!

This was a very sssweet story! I liked seeing Lily and James ssso happy together. I'll never admit thisss to anyone else, but I'm a sssensitive Basilisssk, I love romantic stories!

I wish that Basilisssks could fly. I'd like to be on the broom with Lily and James. Well, maybe not WITH them, because I'm a bit big to share a broomstick. But I'd love to essscape the confines of the Chamber of Secretsss and fly over Hogwarts' grounds.

I think it's very realissstic for James to propose to Lily on a broomstick. She and Quidditch are the two thingsss he loved the most.

I think this tasty little morsel was very sweet and very well-written! I will have to ssslither back to your author's page again ssoon!

Author's Response: Hello!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I love writing little fluffy stories like this, so this one was a lot of fun. I'm not sure if I'd enjoy flying or if I'd get scared being so high up on a broom!
I think the Quidditch pitch would be one of the only places James could imagine asking Lily to marry him.
Thank you for the sweet review!
Cassie :)

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Review #2, by Veritaserum27 ONE

20th July 2015:
Hi there Cassie!

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I just can't with the cuteness of this story! I clicked on it quickly and I didn't read who the characters were in the story so I thought it was Albus or even Harry and YAY - a little James/Lily for me to read in the wee hours of the morning - haha! I really loved it when James kept calling her "Lil." It shows just how close the two of them were. You did a fabulous job with his character - he was calm and confident riiight up until it was time to do the deed - then he got all pale and nervous, but it was totally sweet and romantic at the same time. It makes me a little sad because we know how their story ends, but I really appreciated getting to read about this one happy moment in their lives. Lovely story!

♥ Beth

Author's Response: Hi Beth!
I had so much fun writing this story because it was pure fluff. Sometimes it's just fun to write some good old cliched romance! Haha.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this and it's great to hear that it made you happy!
Thank you so much for another lovely review!
Cassie :)

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Review #3, by acciorobin ONE

1st September 2012:
This is lovely! James/Lily is probably the only ship in the whole of the Harry Potter series that I don't bother with only because it's so perfect! :D I loved this, it was very cute.

Author's Response: Thank you! I loved writing this one-shot, so I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! And the fact that you think I did James and Lily justice is wonderful! Thank you so much!
Cassie :)

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Review #4, by titch95 ONE

27th June 2012:
CUTE! I love James and Lily it's like the one ship and don't like to change to Snilly or anything else. James and Lily's characters are so how I imangined them and portrayed so well by you! I think Lily reminds me of Hermionie a bit in this, they scared of flying and things. Amazing as always.
Titch95 x

Author's Response: Awww I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I loved writing it, because it's pure fluff and romance, and sometimes you need to just write something without any drama or negativity, you know? I loved the comparison of Lily and Hermione! I didn't think of that, but can see it a little bit! Thank you so much!!!
Cassie :)

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Review #5, by luvdobby26 ONE

19th June 2012:
Cassie, I am so sorry I didn't get this done last night. I was so excited when you told me it was up but just didn't have enough time :( I was so annoyed to see I wouldn't be the first reviewer!
Anyhoo, I loved this so so so so much! As you know, I am such a big Lily/James fan so this was just perfect! The only thing I would say though, is it seemed a little rushed. Especially the begining, you could have included more in the scene with Mary, and maybe more of how she was feeling and her thoughts etc.
But other than that, this was AMAZING! The writing was beautiful and I love how you wrote Lily! 10/10 as always!
I'll be reading LMT as soon as possible, hopefully tonight, and LS should be up tomorrow, if not Wednesday. After that I plan to either write chapter 2 of If she could turn back time or chapter 4 of LS, I hope I get another chapter out before the queue closes, even if it's just a one-shot, I did have an idea from one a wee while ago, I've forgottan what it was now...
10/10 :) xx

Author's Response: It's ok that you didn't have time to read it before, life gets in the way of stories sometimes! I know where I can slow down the scene with Mary, and I think I'll go back and look at it, and see what I can do to change it. But I'm happy with the pacing of the story once Lily is with James. The reason his proposal is kind of sudden at the end is because he's nervous so he just gets his guts up and asks her. I'm happy you liked Lily, I had tons of fun with her! I can't wait to hear what you think of LMT, and I'll check for more of LS and If She Could Turn Back Time. Thank you so much for this review!
Cassie :)

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Review #6, by Gabriella Hunter ONE

19th June 2012:

And...I'm back! I saw that you'd answered my review for LMT (Which I still adore!) and I immediately came and attacked this! :D
I wasn't sure what was going to happen but I got little butterflies in my stomach even though James wasn't going out with me. For some reason, haha. Anyway, first a picnic and then, a crazy broom ride through the sky? That was almost as dangerous as much as fun for me, actually. Hahaha. Loved it! I was thinking of doing something like that for Blaise and Astoria, I somehow can't picture her on a broomstick...hm. There was nothing at all wrong with this and I have no complaints! :D It was very sweet and that ending...so envious...haha. I hope you give us some really great surprises for LMT, though! Can't wait!
P.S.: My computer shall be fixed, probably next week, I'm hoping so until then, you shall have to wait! :( I'll be updating "Growth" instantly though!
Much love,

Author's Response: Hi Gabbie! Haha, I'm happy you enjoyed this. I've had some people tell me it was rushed, so I might go back and edit the beginning a little bit, but I'm definitely satisfied with most of the story. I had a ton of fun writing this, because it's pure fluff and romance! I can't really picture Astoria on a broomstick, but I can picture her and Blaise having a picnic... But I bet Astoria would be uncomfortable at first Blaise would have to calm her down convince her to stay with him. I have plans for LMT that I'm really excited about!!! I'll keep checking for Growth, because I can't wait for more of Roxanne and Benjamine!!! Yay! Thank you so much for this sweet review, it was awesome to hear from you again!
Cassie :)

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Review #7, by Opalpixiechick ONE

19th June 2012:
Awww. I love this. Great job. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Feel free to check out my other stories if you want to, I love getting feedback so I can improve!
Cassie :)

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Review #8, by Lucy ONE

18th June 2012:
Lol cuteee! Though a little rushed! and a little umm cheesy but CHEESY IS GOOD! I like it! Have a cookie!

Author's Response: Oh, this story is most definitely pure fluff! But I loved writing it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'd love if you could check out my other stories too! Thank you for the review!
Cassie :)

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